Comments | ladychi: Some Thoughts On Writing: Taking on a New Project; Bones S7 Ep 1 & 2

ladychi

Some Thoughts On Writing: Taking on a New Project; Bones S7 Ep 1 & 2

Nov 12, 2011 17:08

So I've blogged before about how I've spent four years with the familiar cast of Leaven of Malice, tweaking and reshaping and completely rewriting the story, and now that the first draft of a version I actually like is complete, I told myself it was time to take a break while katmorning worked on reading it and editing it -- it was time to take on ... ( Read more... )

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dqbunny November 12 2011, 23:14:12 UTC

I am not very happy with how everything seems to be Brennan's fault. When does Booth get to mess up? I thought the entire thing with the ultrasound was very much OOC for Brennan. I don't think she would have not told Booth, nor is Booth not that dense that he wouldn't have asked. I think Brennan would be talking more about things with Booth than just acting like he's a sperm donor, and random baby bump touches just don't cut it.

ladychi November 12 2011, 23:21:06 UTC

Yeah, I've noticed that too. I think they've gone a bit far with the "LOL, Brennan is a robot" shtick again. What happened to all the progress she was making? In general, she's been far too dense and inconsiderate of Booth's feelings.

I feel like they've been kind of caricatures of themselves for the last season and a half, anyway, so.

dqbunny November 12 2011, 23:29:57 UTC

Yes!! I began feeling the chemistry slip away after episode 100. I loved the Brennan that was with Finn, and I loved Finn. That's the Brennan that's progressed.