Comments | ladychi: Man in a Cowboy Hat

ladychi

Jun 10, 2010 09:52

What's that? New fandom? Oh, just a bit!

Title: Man in a Cowboy Hat
Author: ladychi
Characters/Pairings: Raylan Givens/Ava Crowder (Justified)
Rating: Adult: sex and language.
Summary: Ava's always had a thing for men in cowboy hats. Character study piece.

( She could smell summer on him. Summer in Kentucky... sweet and hot. Tobacco and whiskey. Sex with the windows open and crickets and grasshoppers singing love songs in the background. She could taste her childhood on his breath... and his fingers reminded her of her womanhood. )

Comments 11

dabhug June 10 2010, 15:07:47 UTC

And now you're writing Justified fic! Lordamercy, this was so good!

Excellent work.

ladychi June 15 2010, 12:40:17 UTC

Can't help meself. I do love Timothy Olyphaunt. Thank you so much!

holycitygirl June 10 2010, 15:42:32 UTC

Oh I love this. Raylan is so Bourbon. And the last line kills - in the loveliest of ways.

Thanks for sharing!

ladychi June 15 2010, 12:41:34 UTC

I'm so glad yo enjoyed this! Thank you!

hucknclem June 10 2010, 19:40:30 UTC

OMG, this was gorgeous. And the bourbon line was amazing. Thanks for sharing! :)

ladychi June 15 2010, 12:42:00 UTC

I'm so glad everyone liked that line! It's a favorite of mine. Thanks so much for a great review!

briar_lily June 10 2010, 20:42:21 UTC

This was so beautiful....like poetry. And hot :) Please write more.

ladychi June 15 2010, 12:42:37 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I'm hoping to find the time to stick more of my toes into Justified fandom.

chauncey10 June 11 2010, 01:30:12 UTC

very nice, but i thought boman was her hubby....beau would have been her father-in-law...

ladychi June 11 2010, 01:35:24 UTC

Well, now. That's an embarrassing mistake. *laughs* I'll do the editing. Thanks so much! I'm terrible with names.