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ladychi

Ficlet: Some Sketches from a Notepad

Dec 04, 2008 04:27

Title: Some Sketches from a Notepad (Authorial Doodles on the Basic Laws of Physics)
Fandom: Doctor Who
Written for: momacress, azriona, chaosmonkey and wiggiemomsi, all of whom bid on me during the Support Stacie auction ( Read more... )

fic: doctor who, fic: doctor/rose, fic: tenth doctor, smut

Comments 29

yanks_02 December 4 2008, 12:57:52 UTC

Love it. I normally turn away when I see first person POV stories but I kept with this one and am glad I did. Nice job.

ladychi December 6 2008, 08:48:23 UTC

You know, I'm not usually a first-person fan either. But nothing else would do for this piece!

jaradel December 4 2008, 13:12:30 UTC

Very nice. I like how it goes from Rose, to Ten, back to Rose, and then to Alt!Ten. Very smooth transitions, a little dollop of smut, and a lot of love. Molto bene :)

ladychi December 6 2008, 08:49:04 UTC

YAY! I got a molto bene!

Thank you for your review!

prynne12 December 4 2008, 13:53:56 UTC

These stories are like therapy for...well...THAT episode.

I like to think of this afterward, even more than what's coming up in our count-down to Eleven.

ladychi December 6 2008, 08:51:20 UTC

I tried to watch that DT interview about him leaving because I accidentally clicked on it on YouTube and said to myself, "Chi, you should be able to watch this without sobbing."

I was so completely wrong.

Long story short, this is more therapy for me than anything else!

papilio_luna December 4 2008, 15:47:14 UTC

*wibble*

just.....*wibble*

that's all I've got. Look, I can't even capitalise properly. I'm sporting the wrinkly-chin sad smile. We need an emoticon for that because I find myself doing it quite a bit whilst fic-reading.

ladychi December 6 2008, 08:52:21 UTC

I haven't been to my flist today! You changed your name! I shall find out why, yes?

The wibbly-chin smile. I know it well.

karenor December 4 2008, 18:18:39 UTC

Oh wonderfully done. I loved every bit of it. Every perspective and the laws of... thermodynamics or whatever. :) Really beautiful.

And like someone said up there, first person POV is usually... weird for me, but I'm glad I stuck with it and it really works for this piece.

ladychi December 6 2008, 08:54:13 UTC

Thank you! I was embarrassed that I had to look them up, but high school Physics is a few years away from me!

I'm glad you enjoyed the first-person. It's not my usual style. That's for sure.