Fiction # 52

[ladybug_koozl]

Title: She Dances With Cuban Motion
Fandom: House, MD
Characters/Pairing: House/Cameron
Prompt: housefic50 040. Sight
Words: 772
Spoilers: None
Rating: PG-13
A/N: For the house_cameron ficathon. Beta by drwilltx.

Comments

[jayaydee]

Sometimes, short and sweet is just what we need. Although the latter is more bittersweet in this instance. This was a perfect dream sequence - I love how Cameron's dress changes colour from red to white satin - this stuff always happens to me in dreams!
The final sentence is devestatingly accurate.

[ladybugkoozl]

Thank you! I didn't want it to be too fluffy, so bittersweet is a good descriptor. :-)

[cozy_cupcake]

That was beautiful, bittersweet in the end. Very lovely. I'm a sucker for a dancing House/Cam

;)

[ladybugkoozl]

Thanks for reading! I'm happy you liked it. :-D

[rosehiptea]

That was, as said above, bittersweet. It was sad watching it all end. Well done.

[ladybugkoozl]

Heh! Thanks. :-) I didn't want it to be too fluffy, ya know?

[kj_draft]

I really liked this. The style, and description, and that killer last line. So elegant and well-written.

Loved this:

You blink, not certain whether you can trust your body. Staring at her face for signs of betrayal, you cautiously wrap your arms around her.

And this is lovely:

Her body is warm and fits perfectly in your arms.

Thanks for sharing it!!

[ladybugkoozl]

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[ladybugkoozl]

Heh! That cursed alarm clock. I find that sort of thing happening to me sometimes, where it gradually pulls you out of a dream.

Thank you!