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Fanfic100-Dracula, Prompt #056.-"Breakfast"

Oct 02, 2006 22:57

Title: The Morning After
Fandom: Dracula: General Novel
Characters: The Dracboys, Mina Harker, Professor Van Helsing
Prompt: 056. Breakfast
Word Count: 261
Rating: PG
Author's Notes: LDT here. In honor of October 2nd, a little snapshot of the morning after the famous "blood exchange" scene.

( Breakfast, 261 wds. )

written for: fanfic100, character: abraham van helsing, character: jonathan harker, character: quincey morris, character: jack seward, character: arthur holmwood, fandom: dracula, character: mina harker

Comments 4

assimbya October 3 2006, 11:02:05 UTC

This is very moving, and you got everyone perfectly. I liked that Jack wasn't even there, that Arthur and Mina were doing essentially the same thing, but Jonathan couldn't bring himself to, and that Quincey was the only calculating one. And the ending, of course, was perfect.

By the way, I love your new graphics for the community!

dolevalan October 3 2006, 13:06:28 UTC

"The Dracboys." Hee. And lovely work, as per usual - I love your ability to capture these characters in such lovely little portraits.

jiasachan October 3 2006, 15:10:38 UTC

I love how you always manage to create their personalities so perfectly with just a line or two each. It never fails to impress me.

dracschick October 4 2006, 02:56:57 UTC

I like how you set up the false cheer and then, in the last line, pulled out the proverbial 'rug'.

very nice work:)