Family Conspiracy: The Love Game

[ladyalta]

Title: Family Conspiracy: The Love Game Chapter Eleven Final Part Two

Author: ladyalta

Pairing: Ohmiya, Yama, Juntoshi, Ohba, Ohma, OhnoxKame

Genre: AU

Rating: PG

Summary: Ohno Satoshi’s sister has come up with a crazy plan. She conspires with their family behind his back to get him a husband. Will their plan fail or succeed?

Word Count: 1,846 words

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Comments

[br_arashi]

Aaaawwwn, such a sweet ending!!!
It was a very funny and adorable fic.
Thank you so much for your hard work!

[ladyalta]

thanks for the nice comment! :)

thanks for reading and commenting! :)

[gambitsfox]

Hahaha......he remembers and still prefers his Nino. So sweet! Excellent story! Seems this mild mannered artist in the first chapters gets turned on very easily since he woke up. Lol! You might have to give these boys a real honeymoon. ; )

[ladyalta]

hahaha I would think so, too! but I don't know if I can still write another NC-17. it's hard writing those scenes sometimes I wonder if I'm writing it good enough to please the readers. I mean I may have read a lot of NC-17 Arashi fanfics but still I cannot grasp the true what do you call this? the right feel? of the sex scenes.

but anyway thank you for thinking that this is an excellent story. for now though I'm taking a break in writing. I'm going for a short vacation and maybe by that time I could think of another Ohmiya story.

thanks for reading and commenting! :)

[gambitsfox]

I hope you have a great time off! Sometimes you need a recharge so you can come firing on all pistons. I think you did the sex scenes very well. It is hard writing sex scenes but the only way to feel comfortable is to keep at it. I have the confidence your skill will only get better. Looking forward to your next story! : )

[ladyalta]

well i really hope i could think of a good one again! anyway i'm on my way home. i'm using the bus' wifi.and thanks for the wonderful comment about the story and the sex scene. it gives me confidence to write more good stories.i hope soon!

[wjktl]

Yatta!!! Its a good ending...now I'm glad that he first choose toma and because of nino's love, he changed his mind. Even though some cheating involved! But all we want is their true love unite them ne~
Thanks so much dear!0

[ladyalta]

well if he hears Nino's voice for two years wouldn't your heart and mind think that he's someone special, right?

thanks for reading and commenting! :)

[neko_kirin3104]

Aww,  Tohma... T.T
But I am really glad that everything worked out perfectly for Ohno and his 'Yellow-chan',  despite Nino having to mask his feelings so that he didn't get any more hurt that he already had,  despite the accident,  despite Ohno regaining his memory... He really did fall in-love with Nino, and Nino really did earn that love by not leaving his side. I really liked that~♡

Keep writing,  Abby~☆

[ladyalta]

thanks!!!have you read the other chaptered fics? Five Crazy Days and I'm In Love With My Babysitter's Bestfriend?

[neko_kirin3104]

I will definitely be checking them out~!! <333

[newarashian]

Awww

The story is cute!
I finished it in one go :D

I cried while reading nino's speech so i had to hide in my room

I love the ending! Nice story :) <3