About Loofahs (The Poetry in Motion Remix)

[lady_smith]

remixthedrabble entries are up, so prepare for SPAM.

Title: About Loofahs (The Poetry in Motion Remix)
Fandom: LotR RPS *facepalms*
Character/Pairing: Viggo/Dom *facepalms more*
Time Frame: Unspecified
Spoilers: ...does that even apply to RPS?
Synopsis: The finger keeps moving in little knots and swirls, following Dom's spine up towards his shoulders. "I'm

Comments

[eve11]

I like this a lot, and I'm not an RPS fan. I think it works well as a poem, enough that it's a much more subtle take on RPS-- it's a really neat way to echo the idea of the first one by taking it into first person stylistically and using the real life poetry stylings. It's cool to see how you took the challenge to really remix the story from a genre you dislike and morph it into something that *is* yours. Very cool :)

[lady_smith]

Thank you so much for commenting. I was kind of abashed when this was the only idea coming to me for this assignment, but I took it and I ran with it.