Fanfiction: Fourteen (Part II)

[lady_sb]

A/N:Just wanted to say thank you to those who left comments, it is very much appreciated ^^ Here is part 2 (sorry if a tad late, but unfortunately work and mad women got in the way), with the last part to be posted on Christmas.

Comments are much loved and appreciated. But above all please enjoy ^^

Comments

[niigaki_ayumu]

Ah~ I like this~ ^^

[niigaki_ayumu]

Also I forgot to say that on jrockyaoi the link didn't work, at least not for me. I had to come to your journal to find it

[lady_sb]

Thank you ^^ Yes someone else commented that it didn't work either >_< fixed now tho! Thanks for the heads up ^^

[aitakute]

*applauds* Lovely continuation! My favorite Christmas was the one where Die realises that Shinya smells like oranges. That is beautiful - to realise little things in the grand scheme of everything else that's happening around them.

Trust Shinya to be flustered in front of Yoshiki >DDD The bit where Die had to shove him to give the present was hilarious, but very him. :)

And the last one was a good surprise - the inclusion of Kaoru and Toshiya's breakup as a background alluded to the first Christmas where they were together - it's like, the KxT bits foreshadowed DxS, where KxT got together, then DxS, then the breakups happened in succession.

Ganbatte for the next, ne!

[lady_sb]

Thank you ^^ Glad you like Christmas #3, and I always did like the snapshot style of writing, which I think I probably don't do enough.

And LOL that story with Shinya and Yoshiki has roots in the truth XD but I thought the idea of Die pushing him in front was cute.

Glad you picked that up (the KxT parts), because I wanted to chart the evolution of the band in general but with DiexShinya as the forefront.

The next part is due Christmas! :) wish me luck for bumper too! lol