Fanfiction: Me and Mr. Jones (Chapter 11)

[lady_sb]

A/N:Greetings everybody ^^ Since it's approaching winter (for those of you who have winter), I thought it nice to change my layout to something warmer. Plus those two boys are one of my OTP's ^_

Comments

[mr_i_jones]

This fic totally touched my heart, especially this chapter. I cried o.o but this remided me of what happened to my dad, his cancer couldn't be treated.
You are an amazing writer!

[lady_sb]

I'm so sorry to hear about your dad :(

Thank you for the comment though *hands tissue* very flattered ^^

[mrs_cj_harkness]

That was absolutely heartbreaking! Building up that hope that Lisa would be alright and then ... not :(

Beautifully written.

And teaser: Wedding invites? Interesting. 16th is AGES away!!!

[lady_sb]

Thank you for the comment :)

And not that far away lol I will be working on Chap 12 this weekend anyways so hopefully it can be a little earlier but depending on muses and my boss ;)

[capulet_rose]

This story is gorgeous and heart-breaking.

You've done an excellent job keeping everybody in character within the AU, and I loved how you brought life to Lisa(even though you had to take it away in the end).

I'm hoping for a happy ending!

*crosses fingers*

[capulet_rose]

...it just occurred to me how ironic it is that I put off starting my research paper on colorectal cancer to read this chapter.

[lady_sb]

Yes that is very ironic o.O But thank you for the comment and I am glad I kept everybody in character, always feel that is a must despite it being AU.

Lisa's character is actually very interesting to explore, and with so little background given in the show, I got to play with her personality a little ^^

And hope is always good :)

[bookwrm89]

Oh, this was just heartbreaking. I'm so glad Jack was there for Ianto though. Can't wait for the final chapter & epilogue! This has been such an emotional roller-coaster. And I'm definitely going to be re-reading from beginning to end.

[lady_sb]

I did like writing the scene between them, when I planned this fic out, this was one of the scenes I was looking forward to writing out ^^

Thanks for the comment :) and yeah, not long to go now

[frankiesblue]

That was totally perfect...

I had this vision of Jack watching Ianto at the cemetary, especially when you said that this chapter would reveal Jack's feelings.

[lady_sb]

Thank you ^_^

Yes, this is the chapter where you get to see how Jack was affected by Ianto's little visit. And the realisation that he can never really be blase about him.