"Lost and Found: The Stand"

[lady_macbeth_13]

Title: The Stand
’Verse: Lost and Found
Author: LadyMacbeth
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Sam/Dean/Priestly
Word Count: 2503
Disclaimer: “Supernatural” and all its characters belong to the genius that is Eric Kripke. I make no profit.
Warning: Incestuous slash. You no like, you no look.
Summary: Missouri reveals a secret to the boys

Comments

[jessie_s_girl]

I really enjoy this series. Your characters mesh together very well and the story itself paces quite nicely. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to the next bit.

[lady_macbeth_13]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter is going to be a ton of fun to write, so hopefully it'll go up a lot faster than the last few have.

Thanks for reading!

[kianewma]

damn those cliffies!(dancing in seat thinking about next chapie)GOD woman you always make my imagination run wild when you leave me hanging like this. Than totaly blow my mind with your own in the next chapter. Damn you got me tearing up. Brilliant!

[lady_macbeth_13]

Me and my cliffhangers. I am a terrible, terrible person.

Glad you're enjoying it. I've got big, big plans for the final showdown. I'm going to start whittling away at it in the next day or so, so you won't have to hang on for too long.

Thanks for reading!

[julorean]

Wheeee! Awesome! I lov the image of them gearing up, gathering weapons and stuff, eyes glowing. So awesome.

Tho is it possible to get a sniper shot in at 3 miles? It's a huge target, and the psychic powers help, I'm sure...eh w/e. :P Boys! Boys and they're gonna fight be be awesome! :D

Tho now the Beast looks like the Abaddon creature from Torchwood. wait...I pictured it 4-legged, like a Behemoth type monster...for some reason in this chapter I interpreted it as bipedal...eh.

[lady_macbeth_13]

I've been trying to get the image of the Beast solid in my head. I've always had him as bipedal, dark red, with horns.

If you've seen Blade:Trinity, I would imagine the Beast would look a bit like Dracula's demonic form at the end, only bulkier, two big horns, with a less refined face.

Argh. It's times like these that make me wish I could draw.

And as for the sniper stuff, I don't profess to know anything. I was just going by the stuff I've read or scene in television and movies.

[julorean]

Hmmm. kay. Sounds like the thingy from Doctor Who (The Satan Pit)/Torchwood.

And same for me on the sniper thing. I was just going off a thing I read in one of John Ringo's books...guy managed a chest shot at just under two miles. There's wind and gravity and stuff to take into account.

Also? I posted a ficlet to my journal. I feel so proud. XP

[lady_macbeth_13]

Oooo... I shall go check that out.

[chainedinbeads]

As much as I hate cliffhangers, that was a perfect place to end this chapter.

Of course I now want the rest of it yesterday. :]

Great job as always.

I did see one typo however.

accompanied by the sent of eggs

It should be scent.

[lady_macbeth_13]

Ooh, thanks for the sharp eyes. I shall fix that. It's not a word I use often, so I guess my brain wasn't really paying attention when I proofread it.

And sorry about the cliffhanger. I figured it was the best place to leave it, that way the next chapter will be nothing but the battle.

I promise not to leave it too long. ;)

Thanks for reading!

[chainedinbeads]

You're welcome. If you ever need a beta, let me know. I'd be glad to do it for you.

I don't think you could have picked a better place to stop this chapter. Even if I don't like hanging. :]

[lady_macbeth_13]

Thanks very much for the offer. I'll keep that in mind.

[leenys]

YAY!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

[lady_macbeth_13]

Hooray!

*breaks into dance*