"Lost and Found: Family Ties"

[lady_macbeth_13]

Title: Family Ties
’Verse: Lost and Found
Author: LadyMacbeth
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG13 (for some cussin’ and mild ‘tWincest’)
Word Count: 2756
Disclaimer: “Supernatural” and all its characters belong to the genius that is Eric Kripke. I make no profit.
Summary: Missouri reveals a secret to the boys that send them on a journey to Santa Cruz

Comments

[dodgegirl22]

[lady_macbeth_13]

Oh man... when Bobby finds out... even I don't know yet how that's going to go over.

And furthermore, what will happen when Bobby finds out Dean can speak to the dead?

[dodgegirl22]

[lady_macbeth_13]

Thanks so much.

I know it's weird having Special Sammy dwarfed by the other's abilities. I'm trying not to be too hard on him.

As for the necklace, I really wanted to give Priestly something concrete for him to hold onto.

But that's enough out of me. Thank you so much for your continued readership.

Also: I love your icon!

[julorean]

(Oh, btw, "where too?" should be "where to". and in the passage with te Beast, I think 'plane' would be better, instead of 'plain'). And now for my review:

:spazzes in happiness like a spazzy thing:

Yes! Amazing new chapter here. Great opener there (omg, so dirtyhot). The tension of the search for information, the cool scene with Preiestly showing off his powers (Bobby's caution is a great touch, very true to form).

I quite liked this bit: The assorted trinkets catch the musty light immediately, their crystals and smooth metal reflecting it around the room like tiny disco balls. So descriptive.

And the scene with Priestly and John's charm....awwww. So painful and tender all at once. Wonderful. And it's brass, like Dean's amulet, I believe. I reread that part a few times, just to bask in the emotion there.

Ooo, and there's another tidbit from the Beast. :shivers: it's chilling to think about what might happen. Gods, when it gets out...eeep. That'll be something. O_o What'll our boys do?

[lady_macbeth_13]

Yay! So glad you liked it. And thank you for the proofreading. I shall make those fixes right away.

I liked the opening. I thought it would catch people off guard. *evil grin*

And yes, more of the awww. I can't seem to write anything without a little bit of awww and a little bit of sex.

And the Beast... it won't be long now before he reaches the surface... Dun dun duuuunnnn!

[charlie_jae]

This is rapidly becoming my fav series. I read all the parts in one shot today and was not disappointed. I gotta admit though there was a second there where I thought Priestly was gonna hook up with Sam.

You've got me reeled in here with the psyc twins, and this new beasty. Tis scary kinda good.

Looking forward to more!

[lady_macbeth_13]

Omigosh yay! I'm so glad you like it.

More is definetly on the way.

[unavoidedcrisis]

Amazing beginning, shudder-worthy ending, and I'll agree the middle was fairly AWESOME too. <3

[lady_macbeth_13]

I love writing for the Beast. It is too much fun being the "Dramatic Bad Guy".