Bad Words For Sammy

Apr 13, 2009 00:42


Title:  BAD WORDS FOR SAMMY
Author:  Lady M
Characters: John, Dean (9), Sam (5).
Scenario: wee!chesters, John spanks Sammy, John spanks Dean.
Implement:  Hand, soap
Beta: Minx 
Rating:  PG-13 for spanking and mild swearing.
Warning: Parental spanking of minors.  Please don't read if it offends you.
Disclaimer:  Eric Kripke and the CW own all.  I own ( Read more... )

john spanks dean, wee!chesters, john spanks sam

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nocturnal08 April 13 2009, 05:36:51 UTC
SO CUTE. Love baby sammy.

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lady_m_319 April 13 2009, 22:45:50 UTC
Glad you liked it. Baby Sammy is fun to write.

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liselisa April 13 2009, 05:54:44 UTC
Aw, thank you. I love how Sam called for Dean to protect him. And Dean's "Because Sammy can't keep his mouth shut" was just too funny. All around, such a cute fic. *grin*

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lady_m_319 April 13 2009, 22:55:40 UTC
I tried to show an established, tight brotherly relationship. Sam knows Dean will protect him then throws him under the bus later when John asks about why he was punished. Sam blames Dean. Dean blames Sam. They walk away nudging and poking each other. Only brothers can get away with that. Glad you liked it.

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atalantaj April 13 2009, 06:00:28 UTC
Ah, that was good, sweet Winchester boys. You always do such a good job with writing Sam and Dean as children. I liked the opening with Sam playing with the army figurines, John going through his notes, and Dean looking through his car magazine, it was a nice and quiet domestic scene, which we don't get too often. I felt really bad for Dean with the soap bit. I swear getting your mouth washed out with soap is worse then a spanking, my mom used to use dish soap which was God awful. I liked Deaan protecting Sam from getting his mouth washed out with soap by being honest about how bad it was, and telling him that he can prevent it from happening by not cussing anymore. It's great getting a new fic from you. It's been too long.

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lady_m_319 April 13 2009, 23:24:11 UTC
I'm glad you like how I write the boys. *g* For some reason my muse likes to write about them as youngsters. I never seem to finish any of my teen or adult stories. I think there's variations on how kids get their mouths washed out with soap. Once I saw somebody get their mouth washed out with a bar of Dial soap. God awful says it all. I was real careful what I said after that. I didn't want John to seem too harsh with Dean so I made up the two minute rule. I think Dean has been protecting and teaching Sam since they were little. He still does it as an adult. Thanks for your kind comment. Your encouragement is greatly appreciated.

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suprnaturalgirl April 13 2009, 16:18:42 UTC
Awww..Such a cute fic! I loved it!! Thanks sweetie!!

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lady_m_319 April 13 2009, 23:38:25 UTC
Cute=good. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting.

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lady_m_319 April 13 2009, 23:44:30 UTC
Daddy Winchester is getting the soap. You might want to run and hide. Glad you liked the fic.

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