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We May Never Pass This Way Again, Maybe 3/3

Nov 29, 2008 00:22

Title: WE MAY NEVER PASS THIS WAY AGAIN, MAYBE 3/3

Author: Lady M

Beta: minx999-Thank you, much!

Characters: John, Dean (*8 and 28), Sam (*4 and 24), AU Ben Braeden (8); *age during flashback scene.

Implements: Hand, paddle.

Rating: PG-13 for spanking and mild swearing.

Warning: Parental spanking of minors. Please don't read if it offends you.

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Comments 27

atalantaj November 29 2008, 17:50:13 UTC

Ah, I liked it. Dean's a good dad. I liked that he wasn't too hard on Ben, but that it was enough to teach the kid a lesson. I liked Ben trying to escape too, but Dean already knowing him well enough to make sure he doesn't, and I really like Sam and Dean together raising Dean's kid. Great job on this. There really haven't been too many spanky fics lately, and this was a real treasure, thanks for sharing!

lady_m_319 November 30 2008, 03:25:17 UTC

Glad you liked it. Dean's disciplined Sam before but this was new with Ben so I didn't want him to be too harsh. Thanks for commenting on all three parts.

atalantaj November 29 2008, 17:58:27 UTC

Oh, I was just going to ask why you hadn't posted this on spn_spankings yet? It was really good.

lady_m_319 November 30 2008, 03:29:00 UTC

Thanks for the encouragement. I can't remember if I've posted to spn_spanking before. I think fics I've submitted for different prompt challenges have been posted there. I'll give it a try.

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lady_m_319 November 30 2008, 15:43:53 UTC

Blanket=safe. Got to love little Sammy's logic. Glad you liked it.

astrangerfate November 30 2008, 10:09:15 UTC

Awww, adorable! I think four-year-old Sam was positively the cutest thing ever. :) Lovely story and thanks so much for sharing it with us!

lady_m_319 November 30 2008, 15:47:52 UTC

I had fun writing little Sammy. In the middle of chaos the happy little 'my turn' still makes me *g*.

serena64 November 30 2008, 15:47:40 UTC

Great story. Little Sammy was cute.
I liked Dean knowing how Ben would react - that Ben was lying to Sam and would try to run away as well.

lady_m_319 November 30 2008, 16:06:16 UTC

I liked having Dean thinking like Ben and being able to anticipate his actions. I wanted big Sam to be thrown off his guard by Ben but Dean to be able to see through it. I wanted Dean to be up to handling the situation, and he was.