Practice Makes Perfect

[lady_krystal_79]

Practice Makes Perfect
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Warnings: M/M
Synopsis: Some things don't come naturally, but practice makes perfect.

Comments

[garvaldmains]

Hope you not embarrassed about posting! This was HOT!

Thanks for sharing!!

[lady_krystal_79]

No. :-) Embarrassed about leaving a half finished story at work where I can't get to it for a week!

Thanks for commenting. Feedback is the greatest encouragement to keep writing!

[sarahk_63]

I gotta laugh because it's about the 100th time they've shown Independence Day on Free to Air TV in Oz (& i have it on dvd)...so who spent the night surfing the net...not me, lol :)

In your story, I liked the fact that their first time was not all sweetness and light....Then Jen made a sound, a sound suspiciously like a sob, and Jared went still. “Jen?”

And the reason I liked this story, is that no matter how much one guy wants another, I believe that their first sexual experience together, would be difficult, humorous and with equal amounts of sexy.

And just because they love each other, doesn't mean that they're gonna have the best sex ever, the first time....hence your title to the story.

Sorry for the ramble, did I happen to mention that I liked this story, so thanks for posting :)

[lady_krystal_79]

LOL. I've seen it so many times I can (obviously) write a completely non-related story and keep track of the movie at the same time. :-)

Glad you enjoyed it. And you're absolutely right, no two up-to-this-point-straight guys are gonna' go and sleep together without some...discomfort. Even if they're incredibly hot like Jensen and Jared! :-)

[fanofsuper]

WOW ! If they don't consider that to be good, can't wait to see what is. It's a great story

Just 1 little thing I noticed & not trying to offend:

excepting Sandy, of course should be except for

[lady_krystal_79]

LOL. With those two, a little practice is sure to lead to mind-stageeringly hot action, IMHO. :-)

No offense taken. :-) This is what happens when I'm not paying 100% attention to what I'm writing, followed by being too tired to proof it afterwards! I shall fix it sooner or later. Thank you.

[fanofsuper]

I want to know more about the pratice LOL ! Hope you plan on a sequel & you're welcome

[saavikam77]

Mmmm, I'm so happy I stumbled across this! ^_^ I'm new to the fandom, and loving every minute of it! This, of course, is absolutely wonderful! I love the hot-sweet-awkwardness of their first time. ^_~

[lady_krystal_79]

Welcome! It is a fantastic fandom. Everyone is quite supportive. :-)

Thank you for your encouragement. I love how they persevere despite a few, um, tense moments. ;-)

[kuhekabir]

Loved it. :)

[lady_krystal_79]

Thank you!