Beneath the Magnolia's Boughs - Part Nine

Jan 31, 2009 17:28

Beneath the Magnolia's Boughs - Part Nine
Rating: NC-17 (overall)
Pairing: Dean/Sam, other characters include John, Mary, Missouri, OMC, OFC, and a person who bears a resemblance to the YED.
Category: M/M, AU, Historical
Summary: In the Old South, the heirs of two plantations are married against their will. One a tool to his father's aspirations, ( Read more... )

nc-17, beneath the magnolia's boughs, historical, au, sam/dean

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idiot4dean January 31 2009, 13:00:53 UTC
Brilliant update. Love that Sam has stood up to Fredric and put his new family first. Love Dean making the first move.

Worried about what Fredric has planned but I'm sure it will backfire on him!!!

Looking forward to more.

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lady_krystal_79 January 31 2009, 13:05:29 UTC
Thank you, hon. Sam isn't silly, he see's how well he is treated by his new family as compared to the old. It was only a matter of time...

More on it's way...at some point! :-P

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leodragon1 January 31 2009, 15:14:03 UTC
Update! \o/

I love that Sam and Dean are more content now, and that Sam finally stood up to his father, and over what became a gift to Dean. I LOVE the Black Impala. You described her so well, she sounds beautiful.

The sex between them was so lovely too. I can't wait until Dean gets pregnant, 'cos that's going to be such a happy moment.

Heh, Missouri had to put in her two cents. Hee.

Talbot?! Wow. What's Frederic going to do???

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lady_krystal_79 February 1 2009, 00:47:55 UTC
They always say the calm comes just before the storm...

It's lovely being able to write these "learning" chapters and show the growing relationship.

Missouri is such a wonderful character, she just has to make herself heard from time to time. :-) And what would the Winchesters be without the Impala?

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vastian_steel January 31 2009, 15:41:57 UTC
It's so nice to read of the growing relationship between Sam and Dean.

And in Sam's case, the strength he'd found to stand against Fredric.

I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

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lady_krystal_79 February 1 2009, 00:51:03 UTC
Thank you! I really enjoy writing this relationship. It's great to see Sam's growth too. I'm glad you're still with us as we approach chapter 10!

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lycaness January 31 2009, 17:24:37 UTC
Yay, update!!
Black Impala, I so love that. Good for Sam for standing up to his asshole of a dad, but I am very worried about what he's going to do, he obviously has something planned and has from the beginning, but I can't figure out how he'd be able to get control of the Winchesters money.
Also, DAMN that was hot, I loved the way you described it, the unsureness and the learning process, I love reading these two exploring each other and figuring things out together.

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lady_krystal_79 February 1 2009, 00:56:37 UTC
Yeah, we always intended to bring the Impala in - it's a must! And, oh yes, Fredric has had a plan from the outset, but it's about to be taken up a notch.

I'm glad that turned out hot! I rarely write a blow job just as a whole event on its own - normally it's just a prelude to the 'main event' - so I had a little trouble with it. My beta also slaps me on the hand when I get either too clinical or too cliched, so that always helps!

Thanks for the lovely feedback!

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lady_krystal_79 February 1 2009, 01:00:48 UTC
Thank you! They are slowly but surely becoming 'proper' lovers, getting ever closer to being in love, and it's lovely to witness. :-)

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