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[lady_invidia]

Title: The Damnable Ideal - Part Two
Pairings: Kurt/Blaine
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Kurt wakes up alone in Paris on his and Blaine's five year anniversary. As Kurt slowly gets angrier by his continuing disappearance Kurt has flashbacks to important moments in their relationship where Blaine had been the perfect partner and so easy to love. But where is

Comments

[mochachiato]

Well that was beautiful.

I loved the depiction of the relationship here. I loved that Kurt and Blaine were both shown as flawed. I especially liked how you wrote Kurt's tendency to selfishness, and Blaine's forgiveness of that. And, of course, how in the end, Kurt was able to see past that and realize that something was wrong for Blaine.

The only thing I could suggest would be to make things a little clearer; a couple times I felt that Kurt just suddenly turned up somewhere. That said, you handled the flashbacks, a difficult style, exceedingly well.

Thanks for the lovely fic!

[lady_invidia]

Thank you for reading and reviewing! Your advice is good and useful, I'll definitely check to make sure my plots are logical and that Kurt isn't just popping up in places next time I write about him.

I've always loved the idea of Kurt being just that bit self-centered and Blaine loving him anyway because that's just who Kurt is. Though Kurt did come through for Blaine in the end :-)

[fara1903]

I loved how their relationship is potrayed here!

[lady_invidia]

Yay! I love their relationship on Glee so I'm glad I managed to put that across right. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

[whiterose0328]

Absolutely loved this!

[lady_invidia]

Thank you, such a nice thing to say. By the way, I love your icon!