Hakkai/Gojyo fic!

Aug 17, 2010 21:59

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theemdash August 19 2010, 10:45:12 UTC
You know how I feel about second person, right? How I love and adore it when it's done correctly? NNNNGH.

This is beautiful. Also, Hakkai is one of the most fucked up, amazing characters ever. I now kind of want to reread all of Saiyuki.

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lady_ganesh August 19 2010, 11:50:10 UTC
♥!

I love that Minekura realizes how cracked he is and just works with it. And you should, I find new stuff every time.

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theemdash August 19 2010, 12:16:00 UTC
I think she's very similar to us in that she LOVES how cracked he is. Okay, honestly, I'm woefully behind on the new stuff.

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lady_ganesh August 21 2010, 22:49:10 UTC

smillaraaq August 20 2010, 03:22:34 UTC
Ah, this is lovely, achey and perfect. Second person is tricky but you've pulled it off beautifully here -- it really does seem to suit Hakkai particularly well, what with his layered and divided sense of self. And I love those dreamed/imagined conversations with Kanan, a reflection of his other self pointing out his willful denial, and a poignant reminder of her importance in his life and hints of the appealing character we've never really had a chance to get to know in canon. Of course he'd still think about her.

Gojyo never seems to mind, but madness was curse and nursemaid to him; he knows it as well as you, perhaps better. Perhaps he wouldn't love you if you weren't mad.

Oh, Gojyo. *wibbles*

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lady_ganesh August 21 2010, 22:50:05 UTC
Thank you so much!

Gojyo is...yeah. Poor honey.

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mainekosama August 20 2010, 16:19:08 UTC
*shivers*

Hakkai is creepy, but in such a good way! As short as this was it was fantastic and told everything it needed to.

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lady_ganesh August 21 2010, 22:48:48 UTC
Thanks so much!

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red_squared August 21 2010, 22:36:48 UTC
Oh, yummy!

The usual 'this fic contains Hakkai' sort of warnings apply.

*dies*

And I love that you included Kanan!

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lady_ganesh August 21 2010, 22:48:28 UTC
Thank you! He can't escape her. Wouldn't want to.

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chomiji June 20 2011, 01:31:05 UTC


I cannot believe I never commented on this, but apparently not - apparently I just put it in memories.

This is very hot and also rather sad - so much love, and yet Gojyo doesn't really know what's going on inside Hakkai's head, and it's probably just as well.

(And yes, that's a really excellent warning!)

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lady_ganesh June 20 2011, 01:35:53 UTC
Late comments are still welcome!

Thank you. And yes, it's probably just as well, though I suspect Gojyo knows more than Hakkai realizes.

(Thank you!)

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