Fic: Weiss Kreuz, By the Beautiful Sea

Jul 21, 2009 19:25

Weiss Kreuz, Schuldig + Nagi + Mamoru. Post-Gluhen, ignoring Side B. Much love to emungere for betaing!

Warnings are in Rot13: Punenpgre qrngu, vzcyvrq qhopba, nggrzcgrq abapba (bssfperra).

By the Beautiful Sea )

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mainekosama July 22 2009, 03:41:07 UTC
I loved this! What an innovative concept! The way you wrote Schuldig and Mamoru's and Nagi's reactions to him was great. At first it felt like individual pieces of information (much like Schuldig's brain at that time was supposed to be) and then it all pulled up into coherent whole. Brillantly done.

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lady_ganesh July 22 2009, 23:30:50 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it.

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tiggymalvern July 23 2009, 15:34:58 UTC
Nice AU. I love hte way Mamoru's smart enough to find the weak link inside and turn it around.

Love the coffee shop concept. So simple, so perfect, and impossible to detect by outsiders. Very cute.

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lady_ganesh July 24 2009, 15:51:04 UTC
He can miscalculate but he does tend to know people very well. Thanks so much!

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daegaer July 24 2009, 14:30:33 UTC
Oh, love, love, love! I do like me some damaged Schuldig and Nagi forcing Mamoru to be as, er, clear-minded as Nagi thinks proper. I suspect Neu!Schwarz is about to come down on Kritiker like the wolf on the fold.

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lady_ganesh July 24 2009, 15:51:53 UTC
I suspect Nagi and Mamoru are still arguing over what to call the new team. And Schuldig has said, "now, now, girls, you're both pretty" at least once.

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