I loved this! What an innovative concept! The way you wrote Schuldig and Mamoru's and Nagi's reactions to him was great. At first it felt like individual pieces of information (much like Schuldig's brain at that time was supposed to be) and then it all pulled up into coherent whole. Brillantly done.
Oh, love, love, love! I do like me some damaged Schuldig and Nagi forcing Mamoru to be as, er, clear-minded as Nagi thinks proper. I suspect Neu!Schwarz is about to come down on Kritiker like the wolf on the fold.
I suspect Nagi and Mamoru are still arguing over what to call the new team. And Schuldig has said, "now, now, girls, you're both pretty" at least once.
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Love the coffee shop concept. So simple, so perfect, and impossible to detect by outsiders. Very cute.
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