Comments | lady_deathangel: fic - patd - you are as she was iii.

lady_deathangel

fic - patd - you are as she was iii.

Nov 07, 2008 15:42

( continued . . . )

jon/brendon, girl!verse, ryan/brendon

Comments 14

prettykitty_aya November 9 2008, 02:00:31 UTC

uuuuugh, so good. i love that last scene!

stephanometra November 17 2008, 08:54:21 UTC

Oh man, I love this so much. Can't wait for the next part.

mayqueen517 November 21 2008, 20:19:01 UTC

I...oh. You write Bren with such stunning clarity and the moment of just...her confusion over it all is perfectly rendered.

I loved this so much.

submissionadict November 30 2008, 18:19:51 UTC

while Bill sinks three-pointers every time he sneezes with the ball in his hands.”

made me laugh with the visual <3

but everything else made me cry |:

exesandohesxo

anonymous January 2 2009, 01:40:53 UTC

AHHAHA I LOVE THIS!!! girlbren is my imaginary best friend!! haha i'm such a freak. o btw. ur writing is ^&*(&*ing amazing! i love how you capture their personalities. It's not just sex! Please write more!