false moves (bulldozer remix) f(x), sulli-centric; pg; 1229 words written for the 2011 round of kpop_ficmix (originally posted here); remix of warmboys' cruel intentions)
I really like this fic and especially how you took such a turn on the original -- I love how you darkened it, and the way the same words in the original become so much more chilling in yours. Sulli -- though she wasn't outright vicious, she took such pleasure at Luna's forced diet. I actually enjoyed reading your darker, sharper version of Sulli. Amber's no-nonsense opinions are awesome, of course. And I'm glad Luna had something to smile about at the end :)
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