Oh, this is so very sweet. I adore Lily and James the way you write them. The stuffed animals are wonderful. Everybody always writers Lily as so sensible and mature, but I love the idea that she has a million stuffed animals on her bed, just like an ordinary girl. Another great little story. :)
I think there's no crime in a girl being sensible and mature and also childish and girly. =) Also, when you live away from home for the better part of the year, your bedroom at home tends not to grow with you in the same way it might otherwise do...
heheheee! This is great! There are some *wonderful* Lines in here. Dare I quote them? Sure, why not?
He should never have taught it all those dirty words. because OF COURSE wizard kids' teddy bears talk!
The mirror chose not to reply. "Very diplomatic," James said to it wryly. While I don't entirely understand the fandom obsession with making every single mirror in a magical dwelling overly chatty, this line completely cracks me!! And because it's so funny (and because the mirror doesn't *actually* talk) it SO works.
It wasn't flat at all, but still perfectly round *snigger* You have to write some Arthur fics. Just because, these are GEMS of incomprehension.
"Yes, well a list that large would frighten anybody," James huffed. Ohhh WITTY, too. Lord I love your James.
xDDDDDDDDDD Lots of teddy bears! James and Lily! Coke! This is too cute! I love that James had taught his teddy bear swear words, lol. James and teddy bears are just a good combination =3
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You captured a typical fifteen year old boy's mindset while in a foriegn girl's room, and it worked beautifully for a just out of school wizard.
A very good bit of brilliance, I either laughed or smiled many times while reading, good work =)
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I believe yours is up next, n'est pas?
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Ah yes, I can only remember two of the things I said, oh well. Looking forward!
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He should never have taught it all those dirty words. because OF COURSE wizard kids' teddy bears talk!
The mirror chose not to reply. "Very diplomatic," James said to it wryly. While I don't entirely understand the fandom obsession with making every single mirror in a magical dwelling overly chatty, this line completely cracks me!! And because it's so funny (and because the mirror doesn't *actually* talk) it SO works.
It wasn't flat at all, but still perfectly round *snigger* You have to write some Arthur fics. Just because, these are GEMS of incomprehension.
"Yes, well a list that large would frighten anybody," James huffed. Ohhh WITTY, too. Lord I love your James.
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(I haven't got an Arthur icon, so Ron will have to do in a pinch.)
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Lots of teddy bears! James and Lily! Coke! This is too cute! I love that James had taught his teddy bear swear words, lol. James and teddy bears are just a good combination =3
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Glad you liked it!
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