Exchange Fic #14: Breaking the Seal

Mar 05, 2013 02:54

The actual identity of the writer will remain secret until all the submissions are in and posted.

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Title: Breaking the Seal
Author: rikkitsune
Recipient: c_u_kid
Prompt: Sarah gets invited to what she thought was a Tupperware party, but it turns into another kind of product party altogether. To make matters worse, Jareth shows up.
Rating: M for language and ( Read more... )

romance, adult, jareth, jareth/sarah, sarah, humor, original characters, wordcount: 5 to 10k

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dmacabre March 5 2013, 08:07:51 UTC
This was so much fun, on so many levels. The part where Sarah's struggling to deal with her bitchy co-workers is so on dead to rights it's eerie. And of course, gender-bent Jareth was a hoot, and I love the snark. ;D

(And now I know a hell of a lot more about sex toys than I did before, so it's educational as well.)

P.S. Ooh, you're going to get comments about stopping this fic where you did... *giggles*

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tainted_peaches March 7 2013, 00:09:16 UTC
1. Thank you for a snarky fic where Sarah is able to one up her bitchy co-workers thanks to Jareth. The way gender bent Jareth skillfully beat down on Sekene and Amy was hilarious.

2. In now more aware of toys that I only vaguely had an inkling of. If I ever need one in the next few years, heck in my life, I will know what to search for. Though I doubt I'll ever have the courage to even search for one. :/ It was certainly interesting... ;)

3. OMG! OMG! OMG! Why did you leave it off there??????? I do not typically beg for smut or anything, and its a frat fic, but stopping it right there???? Nooooooooo!!!!! I want more!!!!!!

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nexttosomething March 7 2013, 12:30:25 UTC
Firstly, I think the title of this piece was one of my favorite parts. Double entendres involving Tupperware always make for a solid fic title!

Secondly, this was excellent. I love that Jareth is irresistible, even as a woman.

Thirdly, I will not comment on the fade to black conclusion. *grumbles* ;)

This was a great read, thanks so much for sharing, MA!

PS: I am loving the theme of Librarian!Sarah in this year's exchange. She is one of my favorites. :)

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moon_lover68 March 8 2013, 10:00:29 UTC
Another Librarian Sarah! I really enjoyed this. I loved their dialogue - I wish I could write conversations as easily as that. The supporting players were all really funny and I do love a good verbal smackdown lol.

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lady_rhiyana March 8 2013, 22:13:33 UTC
Brilliant! I loved every single word, and giggled over just about every paragraph. I think the crowning moment was girl!Jareth - of course, even genderbent, he would be absolutely irresistable :-)

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