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Exchange Fic #11: Awakening of a Mother

Feb 24, 2013 00:02

The actual identity of the writer will remain secret until all the submissions are in and posted.

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Title: Awakening of a Mother
Author: gabbie217
Recipient: tallulah99
Prompt: As ever - babyfic. I don't care what it's about, but J/S BABIES.
Rating: G
Plot Summary/Author's Notes: Sarah finds a baby in the woods. -- I wrote this last minute because of reasons and ( Read more... )

sarah, romance, wordcount: under 3k, jareth, jareth/sarah

Comments 5

tallulah99 February 24 2013, 20:40:55 UTC

Lol. I totally understand 'reasons'. They happen allll the time around these parts.

That said, I very much loved my babyfic! You did a great job, especially considering you had to do it under pressure:) I've made 'babiez!' one of my prompts every time and you're the first person to ever make with the smooshy baby story for me. Thank you!

While ridiculously sensible and pragmatic in real life, I do go all kerflumpity over sweet!Jareth stories and I *definitely* think he would be a completely adorkable expectant father:)

And now that he thought about it, she had been eating a lot lately.

I laughed at this line and actually thought 'Oh Jareth, you'd better keep that little observation to yourself, big boy'! Haha!

Very sweet and a lovely portrayal of Sarah's maternal side. I *am* astonished that Jareth didn't at least try to smuggle the little foundling off to the Labyrinth. I guess they have a surplus of goblins running around just now, huh?

Thank you, mystery author!

faeries_midwife February 24 2013, 21:03:59 UTC

What a sweet story... I quite like the idea of Jareth the big ol' softie, sucker for children. I wanted them to keep little Jack -- how did they find out his name? I'm very curious about his story now. In any case, very enjoyable. :)

moon_lover68 February 24 2013, 23:38:54 UTC

Very cute, and I want to know as well about the baby in the woods!

dmacabre February 26 2013, 12:08:32 UTC

Hee, at last tallulah99 gets her fluffy babyfic. And if the name "Jack" wasn't a coincidence, nice one, Mystery Author! *g*

themsmine April 7 2013, 03:28:47 UTC

After seeing him with Toby in the movie, you have to expect that Jareth would want to be a father, and would be a good one. Nice job! :)