Exchange Fic #4: Someone True (6/6)

Jan 27, 2013 13:52

The actual identity of the writer will remain secret until all the submissions are in and posted.

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Title: Someone True, Part Six
Author: faeries_midwife
Recipient: jinx1764
Prompts: 1) A story about how J/S develop their relationship before or after their Labyrinth adventure. Can have time altering elements. Doesn't have to be romantic, can be friendship focus ( Read more... )

sir didymus, romance, jareth, jareth/sarah, sarah, original characters, hoggle, wordcount: 10k+

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jinx1764 January 27 2013, 19:43:45 UTC
Awww! I loved it! What a sweet, happily ever after story. I really loved the touch of possessive Jareth in the kitchen, that's always nice. I really, really appreciate all the work you put into this super fic and enjoyed reading it. What a great way to spend my Sunday afternoon. :o)

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arynwy January 27 2013, 20:35:51 UTC
I always enjoy it when the Labyrinth is an intelligent entity. Yours is one of the best by far. I liked the fact that Jareth is subjected to its whims - keeps him humble.

Your Sarah is very engaging and I get the feeling that Markus won't want to push or cross her. Especially when Toby finally makes his appearance. Thank you for not subjecting us to his presence - he sounds like an odious little toad, LOL!

This was the perfect way to end my weekend, MA. Thank you!

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nexttosomething January 28 2013, 00:42:14 UTC
I wanted to save my comment until all was posted. How awesome are you?! This was truly a feat. Well, well done! Drama, romance, humor. You covered it all with gusto. Pat yourself on the back, Mystery Author, this was seriously excellent.

"Surely Sarah Williams had been created with the sole purpose of torturing him to death."

^ loved that. Yay!

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moon_lover68 January 28 2013, 00:44:41 UTC
Wow, that was really epic! You've created a lovely story and I'm glad you included Labyrinth's opinions (I love her as an entity in her own right). I also really liked the idea of the Book possibly being inconsistent in time. Very well done, I really enjoyed it.

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anonymous January 29 2013, 20:52:16 UTC
Thanks, all! Jinx, I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I was afraid it wouldn't be dark enough, but your prompts didn't really lend themselves to dark stories! I never intended it to get so long but I found it impossible to tell this tale quickly! And of course my muse had to throw in a wrench. ;) So glad you all enjoyed it, it was fun to write. Thank goodness for my beta though, she really found great ways to make it an even better story.

The reviews cheer me up... I'm sick sick sick with what I suspect is the norovirus. :(

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