Comments | la_luciernaga: Story in the Making [26/?]

la_luciernaga

Story in the Making [26/?]

Aug 30, 2014 02:53

bout damn time, right? I had to make this perfect, so sorry it took so long~

Previous Chapter

( He wanted the man closer to him; he wanted to have more of Daehyun. And Daehyun was more than happy to oblige. )

genre: romance, pairing: daejae, genre: friendship, status: work in progress, warning: sexual content, title: sitm, warning: explicit content, rating: nc-17, group: b.a.p.

Comments 6

kpopgeisha September 1 2014, 01:10:42 UTC

I really dont want this fic to end! I'd be totally ok if it ended up being 100 chapters...

la_luciernaga September 1 2014, 01:12:53 UTC

Then you're honestly in luck, because with the way my storyline is going, it looks like it might be getting up there. This is only about a quarter of the way in. I have a lot more planned. :) So glad you love it so much!

galaxy_kzmgm September 2 2014, 01:19:37 UTC

Sooo, I kind've, might've squealed when I saw you updated? Yeah. Definitely did that.

Thank you so much for updating, ah-mazing chapter.
Also, I second the whole 100 chapters thing! Totally down for that idea. Thanks a lot, author! <3

la_luciernaga September 2 2014, 05:10:32 UTC

Squealing is much approved of, so I won't say anything. xD

I'm so glad that you enjoy it so much~ <3

Hurhurhurhurhur kapike September 10 2014, 03:29:49 UTC

WAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I cannot believe my eyes! They did the rumpy de pumpy! Wow. This was written so amazingly. I could feel the tension, excitment, and awkwardness! Youngjae is so very precious. He is silly that he felt ashamed of his dick and wanted to hide it from Daehyun. I wonder if that is something they will talk about later? Anyway, Daehyun was awesome here. So sweet and loving. I really loved how Daehyun only thought of Youngjae and Youngjae's comfort. The sex was awesome. This as awesome. I really, really, really loved it. It was perfect. Thanks so much for this! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Re: Hurhurhurhurhur la_luciernaga September 10 2014, 07:51:25 UTC

Rumpy de pumpy! LOL That killed me, it truly did. xD

I am so glad that you were able to feel all of that through my writing. I always fear that the proper emotions weren't expressed in the way that I hope, so it's good to be reassured.

<3