Story in the Making [24/?]

[la_luciernaga]

This chapter was hardly planned or intended, but I thought it might fit well. And I can never pass up angst. Obviously, it's longer than the last, but not quite as long as the next two chapters--which are big and important ones, I promise you.

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I am dead it was so good!

[kapike]

Hurhurhurhurhru! This chapter! OH YOU! THIS ONE IS THE CREAM OF THE CROP! I mean, it is still a dance between them. More pushing, shoving, running away, etc but oh yeah did I loooooooove this chapter! Drunkin Daehyun! YOU ARE MY FAVORITE! I can't believe you finally wrote him bold! The part where they start to dance, he grabs Youngjae, compliments him on his ass, says what he would do to Youngjae!!! Frick! It was sooo hot and so good. I love that Youngjae tells him "You're so big"!!! And the stupid Daehyuun runs away! and they exchange words again! ARGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are leaving me in a dry spot you teasing wench!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: I am dead it was so good!

[la_luciernaga]

I don't think that I have ever been called a teasing wench and I don't think I have laughed that hard in a few days. xD

Daehyun is actually a lot more forward and bold than it might have seemed for a while and it'll come to light over the course of the story~

I can tell that you enjoyed this, so for that I am proud and happy. Don't worry, this dry spell may not be lasting too much longer. ;D

!!!!!!

[kapike]

Also, I forgot to add that Daehyun tells YOUNGJAE THAT HIS ASS IS BETTER THAN HIS GFS!!!! Also, something else but I forgot what it was!