Tortured Body and Soul [1/3]

[la_luciernaga]

I'm a cruel, cruel person and I have no idea where this idea had come from, but...it's pretty damn bad. There are going to be three parts to this, and I warn you now, it's only going to get more graphic, violent and bloody as the chapters progress.

Any italicized part is a flashback, for reference.

And don't worry, much self-hatred is taking

Comments

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[kapike]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!?!???!! I AM DYING HERE. I AM DYING! Ok. So I read this rather quickly since I was freaking out. Himchan and Jongup are from two different gangs but then met and became lovers. Did I get that correctly? And now someone from Himchan's gang has kidnapped Jongup to get information out of him about his gang/gang leader? And Himchan is the one torturing him! OMG that sucks. This is terrible! I mean, your writing is amazing and sooo good but this is terrible! I want to cry and it is only the first chapter with more horrible stuff to come. Does it at least end happy or no? Does Himchan end up killling Jongup? I have so many questions. I hate that Himchan is the one who is torturing him. He is torturing them both in different ways. I do love Jongup for refusing to give away an information since he loves his boss and other men. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! <3 <3 <3 You will need to write a fluffy, ridiculously happy, happy, more fluffy himup after this

Re: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[la_luciernaga]

Okay, I really don't want to spoil anything but you almost got it right. Himchan was of an opposing gang, but Jongup hadn't known. Himchan was an informant who tricked Jongup to get closer to Jongup's gang.

This really is a terrible story and I am so ashamed of myself because there is so much worse that has happened to Jongup..so thank you for being awesome and loving my writing, but really...you've been warned.

[ext_1319118]

Wow, this is simply amazing, I was kind of hesitate at first because the theme seems really dark but omg it's really good. Your writing style, I love it xD
It hurts me so bad ;;;;; Himchan torturing Jongup like that is just too much ;;;;
I'm anticipating for more xD

[la_luciernaga]

I don't usually touch on dark themes, especially with what the content of this story will contain, but thank you so much for giving it a try! I'm glad you like it and expect more within a week or so. :)

[ext_1319118]

Sure thing I will wait ^^ Just hope you won't drop it ; A;