Comments | la_luciernaga: Story in the Making [8/?]

la_luciernaga

Story in the Making [8/?]

May 09, 2014 01:06

So far, legit one of my faves chapters, though I really do adore the next one despite the content of it..but that's all I'm saying.

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( Youngjae flushed immediately. He hadn’t realized that Daehyun was awake, or that he had been disturbing his long time roommate with his movements. He just hadn’t been able to sleep. )

genre: romance, pairing: daejae, genre: friendship, status: work in progress, type: chaptered, rating: pg, title: sitm, group: b.a.p.

Comments 2

Dead kapike May 10 2014, 04:47:38 UTC

This was adorable! I couldn't help but squeal while I read this. I love how it all comes together with Youngjae not being able to sleep, then Daehyun crawls into bed with him and tells him what sees of Youngjae, Youngjae saying how he isn't worried about himself but Daeyun! And Daehyun goes “You’re…worried about me?”? all cute like. I love how Youngjae's worry about him sets something fluttering in his body! Awwwwwwwwww Daehyun staying in Youngjae's bed to sleep. That is so cute. OMG! DON"T TELL ME THEY WAKE UP CUDDLING AND ALL TANGLED UP TOGETHER IN THE NEXT CHAPTER?!??! OH I REALLY HOPE SO. I really, really, really liked this one. Loooking forward to more. :)

Re: Dead la_luciernaga May 10 2014, 04:56:48 UTC

I try for fluff, because daejae fluff is just amazing.

Unfortunately, I won't do many chapters that run like that, where they're back to back since there is about a year of a relationship that I want to cover and it looks like it's already going to be a ridiculously long fic. xD There are usually a couple days or a week between each chapter just to help progress the timeline. Sorry!