Nuke Big Bang 2010 fic: And Then There Were Three. Pt. 8

[la_fours]

Title: And then there were three
Author: la_fours 
Artist:dirklover23 
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I own nothing, but my words and the order in which I put them. Don't sue, cause I don't want to give you my cat.
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Noah, Luke/Reid
Word Count: 21 500 for all 8 parts
Warnings: Angst, Adultery, Alison (she's not really a warning, I just like alliteration)

Comments

[secondmezzanine]

"Uh, hey Luke," Noah says, as their eyes meet for the first time in 15 days, 2 hours and 26 minutes (not that they've been counting).

Totally love this line. &hearts

And I love the inclusion of Ali; she's one of my faves!! Thanks so much for sharing!

[la_fours]

Thanks, I really liked that line too :)

I'm glad you enjoyed Ali, it was really fun to expand on her friendship with Noah so I'm glad it worked.

You're welcome!

[evl_bbw88]

SO I WANTED TO KINDA SMACK THE STUFFING OUT OF LUKE IN ABOUT 90% OF THIS, NGL. OH MOTHER EFFER DID I WANT TO SMACK HIM.

AND NOAH, BB. MY HEART. IT HURT SO BAD FOR HIM. :'(((((((((

And Reid. Well......I kinda felt bad, because he really was head over heels for Luke, but yeah. Still wanted him to get hit by a train (Oops? Touchy subject? ;P)

LOVED IT OVERALL TONYA! OMRO SO PROUD OF YOU BB!! ♥

[la_fours]

I did make Luke a bit of a punk didn't I? I guess this was my way of showing the Luke/Lily similarities that are so glaringly obvious to me.
And you know Noah is my boy, so I had to torture him, cause you always hurt the ones you love ;)
You still want MY version of Reid train-dead? That is cold Mayah. You are stone cold :P

Thank you so much bb!

[turtleisland]

I really enjoyed this fic! Thanks for sharing!

[la_fours]

Glad you enjoyed it, and you are very welcome!

[natashaodwalla]

OKAY. SO I read what it was about and wasn't sure I could do it. Like,I wasn't sure my heart could take it.

And it did *GUT* me but in the most brilliant way. And not only for Noah but for Luke and Reid as well. You did such an amazing job really making me sympathize for all of them (something the show FAILED to do)

And when Noah told Luke he obviously wasn't enough? And just asked him to leave? DUDE. I died a little inside. I wanted to go into the story and give Noah the biggest virtual hug ever ever ever.

And I loved how it wasn't like some instant reunion. It was realistic and the thought of them falling in love all over again, faults and all just made me so giddy and swoony. BOYS. ♥ THEY'RE SO IN LURVEEE.

BUT YES. LOVED THIS SFM, TONYA.

[la_fours]

Thank you so much Tasha bb! What awesome feedback.
I am such a whore for angst it's ridic. So I am sorry if I broke you a little bit. I just always figure the more you break something, the better the pay off when you fix it.

I am SO glad you were able to sympathize with all three characters, cause that's what I wanted more than anything. Obviously Noah was "the victim" overall, but I didn't want anyone to really be "the bad guy". Just a bunch of good people who made bad decisions. So happy it came through that way for you.

So once again THANK YOU TASHA!!!

[aloofly]

Like Mayah, I pretty much wanted to smack Luke for almost all of this, and simultaneously hug the shit out of Noah. And Reid pissed me off too, but Reid always pisses me off so that's okay. :D ANYWAY. This fic kind of hurt my heart but then you mended it at the end so all was good with the world. Thanks for sharing! ♥

[la_fours]

I know I hurt you Adi, but thanks for sticking with it. I was going to say I'm sorry I hurt your heart, but that's not really true since that was the point of the story :P But I fixed it at the end so you forgive me right?

Thanks for reading and commenting bb!