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I Will Follow You Into The Dark - Part 3/3

Jul 30, 2011 16:42

Title: I will follow you into the dark
Part: 3
Author: la_fours
Artist: winterevanesce

( Part 3 )

Comments 43

wheelie47 July 31 2011, 23:27:19 UTC

What a really fantastic and beautifully written story!

Loved how you wove the Inception concept into this Nuke story! So touching how, even though Noah couldnt remember who Luke was, he let him in and still grew closer.

Just loved how Luke kissed Noah on the forehead just as he entered the dream; telling him to come back to him. So touching.

Thanks for sharing such a great story.

la_fours August 6 2011, 22:30:08 UTC

Thanks so much!

Happy that the concept worked well for you. I thought it might be a gamble, but it's been great getting such a positive response.

You are very welcome. Thank you for reading and commenting.

sweetiejelly August 1 2011, 02:33:13 UTC

Tonya! Congrats on another awesome BB! I don't think I've read any Eames/Arthur but I loved the way you write them here. Also, Arthur might have tugged at my heartstrings a lot bit.

Noah takes Luke’s hand as he is led through the front door. “I would follow you anywhere.”

And that’s exactly what he plans to do for the rest of his life.
♥!

la_fours August 6 2011, 22:42:38 UTC

Awww, Ronnie! Thank you so much!

I'm so glad that Eames and Arthur were enjoyable even though you've never read their stuff. There are some brilliant writers in that fandom, and I took a lot of cues from them.

My attempts at romance have pleased you and therefore I am pleased!

random_nic August 1 2011, 07:01:27 UTC

So WOW. I mean, just. WHOA. This was so freaking phenomenal! I'm giving you a virtual high-five and a fist bump besides.

This and the Keeping up with the Joneses BBs are my favorites so far. I am loving these movie adaptations Nukestyle. So much talent in this fandom!

la_fours August 12 2011, 03:28:34 UTC

Thank you so much! I happily accept all forms of hand slapping accolades.

So happy you enjoyed the crossover!

newhaven183 August 1 2011, 11:23:19 UTC

What a great final chapter...especially the way Noah sped through Oakdale zipping in to his memory banks; and what a fitting place for him to end up...in the place where he and Luke first made love. Also fitting to Col. Crackers to be delivered into his own worst nightmare.

Tonya..i hope this is just the start of many new fanfics here on Live Journal.

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la_fours August 12 2011, 03:29:28 UTC

Thanks! So happy you liked the way it all came together in the end. It was really fun to write :)

jeri_1116 August 2 2011, 02:03:20 UTC

This was awesome, I really wish it were longer. The way Noah felt around people like he knew he belonged but still felt a little strange. And even though he couldn't remember Luke, he needed to be around him so really the Colonel didn't win Noah was still loved.

And again have not read any Arthur Eames but I will be now, I legit really fell in love with them.

“Noah.” Arthur starts. “Noah, it’s going to be okay. Soon he won’t be able to hurt you anymore I promise ( ... )

la_fours August 12 2011, 03:31:49 UTC

Thank you for such a lovely comment. I didn't know if this idea would work at first, but you guys have really made me feel great about this story.

You really should check out some A/E, they are a seriously fun pairing to read.

Sorry I made you misty *passes you a hanky*, but you are very welcome :)