un regalo per nuvolaluz

Mar 29, 2009 00:55

Because
by ? // for nuvolaluz

characters/pairings: Gokudera/Tsuna
rating: PG
warnings: It’s kinda mushy. No spoilers whatsoever.
wordcount: 2036

summary: Gokudera tries to secretly give up smoking, but it’s harder than he thinks, because Yamamoto is an idiot and Tsuna chews on his pens.
notes: how the hell is this longer than my non-pinch hit?

The night sky is full of stars. )

t:bl, r:nuvolaluz, c:gokudera, c:tsuna

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nuvolaluz March 28 2009, 17:45:08 UTC
HOW DID I WAKE UP TO THIS AWESOME???

Thank you so so so so much! I love this pairing and the whole Gokudera quits smoking plot. I adore it! Mostly because my father quit smoking when he found out I was going to be, and I define it as a huge expression of love.
I can't even begin to praise the free, beautiful style this is written in. Maybe because it's in present tense and that always sticks with me really well. It's perfect, anyway. And the dialogue! I commend you times ten plus chocolate for the ICness of your Gokudera, Tsuna and Yamamoto. Yamamoto!

Yamamoto has this way, sometimes, of saying the most amazingly insightful things in the most amazingly stupid, straightforward way. And Gokudera has been on the receiving end of this before, but it always leaves him feeling horribly exposed.I love that so so much because it's so true. I dunno if it's ever happened in canon, but it seems the kind of trait that Yamamoto has naturally. Yamamoto+Luna Lovegood = OTL ( ... )

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mewling March 29 2009, 06:07:47 UTC
I AM REALLY GLAD YOU LIKED THIS. To be honest with you I had a lot of trouble getting you a fic because of people dropping off and not saying anything, and meanwhile you kept submitting loads of awesome fic, so it got to the point I just said, "Sod it, I'll do it myself". In short, I AM REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, glad you liked it. And thank-you so much for everything you've done for this exchange (even the stuff you don't remember ;D).

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nuvolaluz March 29 2009, 06:10:35 UTC
*grins*

I'm so beyond embarassed. I even clicked on that link and started reading it and thinking... hmm, I could have written this, and I had to get to the quasi dialogue to confirm it, hahahaha.

But yes. Thank you so so much. I put it in memories and when I get the chance I'm gonna brag about it openly on my journal.
AND I SERIOUSLY HAVE TO GIFT YOU SOMETHING PERSONALLY NOW.

Gimme a prompt and pairing, yus?

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dame_batsie March 29 2009, 22:41:28 UTC
First of all, please forgive me for reading Tsuna chews on his pens as Tsuna chews on his penis.

Second of all, this fic freakin' rocks. I love how in character they are. And how adorable they all are.

Third of all, this line

because there’ll sooner be a bullet in Gokudera’s chest than a tumour but he’ll quit anyway, because, because, because -

- Because Gokudera is sixteen years old, fifty-two months a mafioso, two-hundred and thirteen weeks a smoker, four days in withdrawal, and approximately seventeen-thousand, five-hundred and twenty-two hours, six minutes and forty seconds in love.

I love it. <3

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mewling March 30 2009, 06:41:42 UTC
That would be...ouch...incredibly painful. But you're forgiven ;D

Thank-you so much for the lovely comment ♥ That's my favourite bit too!

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