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Merry, Merry Roadstergal
Dec 21, 2009 17:29
Law and Order, Criminal Intent - Goren and Eames
Word count: 1200
Rating and warnings: None
Description: Each scene - 100 words *exactly*
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untapdtreasure
December 22 2009, 14:36:51 UTC
I really, really like the way you have written this and what you've done with it! and the ending...perfect! I can see how that would push someone to murder.
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squarey
December 23 2009, 01:22:58 UTC
Thank you! Did you start mentally going over the song?
I wouldn't like being shared either :P
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untapdtreasure
December 23 2009, 01:52:45 UTC
yes, i did....when i got to Two and a little lightbulb went ding!
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havers
December 22 2009, 16:15:20 UTC
ONE: funny, so typical Bobby.
TWO: Öhm, good question.
THREE: And that he get with 'a bit' French?
FOUR: “You think one of these is Michael?”...funny!
FIVE: Five rings? Alex must love them.
SIX: More questions.
SEVEN: Igitt, they share everything, also the wife? “Maybe someone got tired of sharing.”...very good point.
EIGHT: More coffee.
NINE: A ballerina? c'mon!
TEN: A second death...Bobby in his best: “Though, looks like more of a push than a jump.”
ELEVEN: A seond wife, a second jumper?
TWELVE: “I don’t like being shared.”...god, heavy.
Wow, you're so good with these little ones and all belong together. Really great done.
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squarey
December 23 2009, 01:23:52 UTC
Thank you! Hopefully your brain was following along with the song after the first few scenes :D
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basric
December 23 2009, 02:27:35 UTC
Wonderfully creative and well written. I loved reading it.
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baylop
December 23 2009, 05:52:40 UTC
This was very, very cool. :D
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scriberestagere
December 23 2009, 19:45:54 UTC
Ahhh...LOVE it, love love it. And miss your writing so very much. I'm hoping this is the sign of more good things to come...?
<3
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I wouldn't like being shared either :P
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TWO: Öhm, good question.
THREE: And that he get with 'a bit' French?
FOUR: “You think one of these is Michael?”...funny!
FIVE: Five rings? Alex must love them.
SIX: More questions.
SEVEN: Igitt, they share everything, also the wife? “Maybe someone got tired of sharing.”...very good point.
EIGHT: More coffee.
NINE: A ballerina? c'mon!
TEN: A second death...Bobby in his best: “Though, looks like more of a push than a jump.”
ELEVEN: A seond wife, a second jumper?
TWELVE: “I don’t like being shared.”...god, heavy.
Wow, you're so good with these little ones and all belong together. Really great done.
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<3
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