Fever Pitch

May 22, 2008 18:35

Title:  Fever Pitch
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equusentric May 23 2008, 01:33:04 UTC
Coughing with broken ribs hurts like a mofo, and I winced every time Parrish coughed. *ouch!*

I like that Lorne is obviously a fantasy fan. ;)

Yummy-hurty sex = very hot!

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l57371 May 23 2008, 03:01:15 UTC
Yay, somebody liked it!

I figure anybody who doesn't bat an eye over walking through a Stargate and battling both Goa'uld AND Wraith has got to be a fantasy fan just to survive with mind intact, heh.

Thanks for reading!

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lalpadme May 23 2008, 02:56:46 UTC
Beautiful! Parrish was so in-character, also I did like they way Sheppard did behave throughout.
And of course my dear Lorne, he was so great! Really enjoyed the story!

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l57371 May 23 2008, 03:03:56 UTC
Thank you! I have to think that Sheppard would be totally sympathetic to Lorne's panic.

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lalpadme May 25 2008, 04:24:10 UTC
You're welcome!

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fififolle May 23 2008, 06:16:10 UTC
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I loved this. The scene where they rescue Parrish is utterly delicious, poor Parrish, and indeed poor Lorne. The whump is great :)
Mmmy, yummy funny hawtness with teh cute ending! Lorne was cute, worrying about the injuries, and Parrish was too funny, ignoring them :D
Lovely. More any time!

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l57371 May 23 2008, 14:05:28 UTC
Thank you, and thank you again.

Working on it, but not for another few weeks I think. I have this damned schoolwork that keeps getting in the way of stuff. Between that and my kids, it's just impossible to get to the important things, y'know?

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fififolle May 23 2008, 20:07:40 UTC
I couldn't agree more! LOL :) My poor kids... ;)

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sheamackenzie May 23 2008, 23:59:31 UTC
::flail::

Huzzah!

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dreaming_k June 15 2008, 10:22:12 UTC
Oh, I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing it.
I hope you'll werite more for Lorne/Parrish soon! :)

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