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Jun 23, 2007 20:50

House started and looked up sharply as the lights in his office flickered once, twice, and then went dark once and for all. He glared at his blank computer screen which was no longer showing the case he had been writing up.

Fuck.

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julia_bohemian June 27 2007, 07:35:55 UTC
yummy

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l57371 June 28 2007, 01:55:10 UTC
Merci!

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chaoskir June 27 2007, 08:47:32 UTC
OMG! That´s so wonderful. Where was you being untill now? I think you have really a very good grip on the character´s and I want to read more. More of your pencil and I really would like it if I could read more of this story. Do you plan to write more chapter or a sequel?
Thank you for sharing this wonderful and impressing stuff with us. BTW you get a grip on me with a story like this. *sig* I want to read more.

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l57371 June 27 2007, 15:29:16 UTC
Where was me being? Hiding. No, I hadn't planned to write more of this particular story, just a one-off. I have other story lines in my head though, rolling around somewhat aimlessly.

Thanks for the kind words!

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captain_lubey June 27 2007, 09:55:37 UTC
Oh I'm in love with your closing lines! No Jimmy. No Greg. Just Wilson and House.

And this fic was very hot.

Stairwell sex.

*dies*

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t_eyla June 27 2007, 09:55:42 UTC
Oh I loved the plot! Why didn't anybody else ever think of this? Go you for coming up with it!

And the sex was hot. Mhmm stairway sex :). And your decriptions of Wilson's looks/expressions? Very hot all on their own!

Moar soon?? :)

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bmax67 June 27 2007, 14:54:32 UTC
This is your first fic??? Wow. Nicely done.

Loved how House was "hiding" under his desk.

I could totally picture the hop, step adventure down the stairs. Totally House to memorize the number of stairs. Then, of course, the hot first time sex in the stairwell.

Sex in a stairwell for the first time with my best friend is something I’ve always wanted to try, you know.”

Loved this line for some reason. Made me giggle.

Loved the ending.

Hope to see more from you!

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