Eeek! I remember clearly my brother teaching me to ride his Aspencade , it was huge and I did drop it in the end. I prefer to be the passenger now. That was lovely and the ending was sweet.
Aspencades are damned huge to learn on, that's true. But I learned on a DT125 too, much easier. I, however, will never pillion again, if I can at all help it.
His legs are close against mine, and I don’t even mind that I can feel the inside of his thigh against the scar on the outside of mine. Because I can feel more than just his belly against my backside.
I hardly ever read anything under R-rated, but I did because it's you. And now I have a mental image of House watching Wilson working his bike. Thank you for that (:
There was a lot about this that was wonderful: House's description of Wilson's progress, the fact that the other motorcyclist was a woman, the 'toilet plunger' line, House regretting teaching Wilson.
The voice you chose here was very unusual--it was first-person House (which can be very hard to pull off), but what made it different was that it was almost as if House were telling the story--no dialogue, but House reporting what was said and what happened. I don't think I've seen this style very often, anywhere. I think it worked here, absolutely, but I'm just not sure I like it wholeheartedly. I'll have to chew on that...
That said, though, this was indeed very well done. Yay, bike love! :) *happy dance*
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So sweet *-*
His legs are close against mine, and I don’t even mind that I can feel the inside of his thigh against the scar on the outside of mine.
Because I can feel more than just his belly against my backside.
We’re going home.
House is so romantic... and possessive *O*
GREAT JOB!!
Kisses
bye :D
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jujuju may I steal that beautiful thing?
Yeahh... is very suggestive, see Wilson riding House's bike n///n
*dribble*
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I hardly ever read anything under R-rated, but I did because it's you. And now I have a mental image of House watching Wilson working his bike. Thank you for that (:
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The voice you chose here was very unusual--it was first-person House (which can be very hard to pull off), but what made it different was that it was almost as if House were telling the story--no dialogue, but House reporting what was said and what happened. I don't think I've seen this style very often, anywhere. I think it worked here, absolutely, but I'm just not sure I like it wholeheartedly. I'll have to chew on that...
That said, though, this was indeed very well done. Yay, bike love! :) *happy dance*
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