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l57371

One Meal at a Time

Aug 19, 2007 22:23

Title: One Meal at a Time
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plasticineheart August 20 2007, 06:12:09 UTC

Oh my god...that was incredibly hot. Loved the plotline as well! Very cute, and IC; I can actually see that happening XDD

Just one thing I saw:
gripped it loosely in his hand, stroking slowly up and done. 'done' should be 'down'

Great job<3

lilapaddy August 20 2007, 21:29:33 UTC

*drive-by icon love*!

plasticineheart August 21 2007, 04:15:19 UTC

:DD Yours is amazing as well. Srsly, one of the best scenes ever.

l57371 August 21 2007, 02:32:14 UTC

Thank you! And I fixed the typo, thanks. Someday I will get something posted that has no typos whatsoever, and on that day the world will come to an end.

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lex_4_well August 20 2007, 06:42:22 UTC

that was great :)

l57371 August 21 2007, 02:32:41 UTC

Thanks so much!

empressaurelius August 20 2007, 06:53:08 UTC

Ahahaha, House being picky about the nuts that might possibly be on the brownie=AWESOME. I personally hate nuts of any kind anywhere near my brownies, so I can appreciate his thoughts. LOL. I can so see House sitting there, doing his own quick differential to see if the brownie was all right to eat, too. Haha.

Love the slow, careful seduction through food-perfect way into House's attention, at least-and of course, a very Wilson method of capturing said attention. XD That moment where he smiled at House through the office window was so good.

House's pondering what Wilson wanted made me shake my head-DUH, House. Silly boys!

Aaw, Wilson wanting to be one of the things House loves. *Sniffs*

Wonderful sex-but wouldn't it have hurt House's leg a bit, what with the standing? Good thing they made it to the couch for the second round, at least.

House is a man after my own heart, what with his loving dessert. *Winks*

l57371 August 21 2007, 02:33:51 UTC

That's why he was holding onto the counter top behind him. Did that not come through clearly, or was it not believable that he could manage on one leg and leaning on a counter? Just looking to clarify...

Thanks!

empressaurelius August 21 2007, 04:31:36 UTC

Ooh, yeah, you might want to make little details that a bit more obvious in the future. Just my opinion, though. :) And you're welcome!

remsy_md August 20 2007, 07:05:24 UTC

::squee:: *O*

That was awesome!!

Oh! god... You're amazing!!! >w<
I love every single fic that come from you!!

GREAT WORK!!! as always ^^

Kisses
bye :D

l57371 August 21 2007, 02:34:46 UTC

Thanks! Much appreciated.

evila_elf August 20 2007, 08:38:08 UTC

Omg!
*ded*

*mems*

l57371 August 21 2007, 02:49:42 UTC

Hee, love the icon. Thanks!