Get House Laid fest prompt 219

[l57371]

Title: Prompt 219
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[seriouslyroo]

Ah...ahh. *sigh of relief*

That was nice. :D *guh*

[l57371]

Thank you! And you're quick, that was only a few minutes after I posted it.

[recrudescence]

*grins* Very sweet, and the ending is perfect.

[l57371]

Heh, thanks.

[starlingthefool]

Thumbs up! Liked the changes.
Also, I will NEVER be able to get the image of striptease!Wilson out my head. People will be asking me where the new Stephanie Meyer book is tomorrow, and what will I be thinking of? Wilson pulling off his belt and jerking off while House watches. That's mighty distracting. And I love you for it.

[l57371]

But it's *such* a lovely image. Why would you want to get it out of your head, srsly?

Thanks again for your help, it's much appreciated.

[plasticineheart]

Heh. Heh. Heh. I love work!sex. I'll definitely never be able to think about the oncology lounge the same way again ;-) Loved it ♥ Just a few things I found...

“You’re turn. You lay down. Now.” should be Your

tossing it to the floor before diving into kiss him again. should be in to

pulling, fast and jerky like horny teenager, you're missing an a before horny.

an wrapped his arms tightly around the still shivering man’s back. you're missing the d to make that and

;-) Aside from that though, brilliant job.

[l57371]

Gah. Typos fixed, thanks. You'd think after reading it through about a million times I'd see these, wouldn't you?

[plasticineheart]

You're quite welcome; it's what I do :) Ah, don't feel bad - it's a simple trick of the eyes and mind. Happens to the best of us.

[mrowrr]

ooh, that may have been the hottest House/Wilson fic i've read! i thoroughly enjoyed reading this. :)

[l57371]

Thank you!