Comments | l57371: Unrelenting

l57371

Unrelenting

Jul 30, 2007 13:06

Unreleting

The first thing House was aware of was light. He pried his eyes open and peered blearily in the direction of the unwelcome intrusion. Sunlight. Peeking through the blinds on his bedroom window. Morning? When did that happen? Think back, think back… Oh yeah, Wilson and his wonder drugs.

That stuff really knocked me for a loop. I ( Read more... )

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fearless_jones July 30 2007, 20:05:14 UTC

Ah, this is lovely! I really enjoyed reading this. wilson is completely sweet as house's nurse. Lol

l57371 July 31 2007, 01:34:09 UTC

Wow, you're fast. You commented only a few minutes after I got it all up!

Thanks!

triedunture July 30 2007, 20:13:23 UTC

Wow. A simple story, with a familiar set-up, yet there was something more tender about this story than all the others I may have read. I liked the plain language: nothing flowery and nothing sinister. Just straight up sweetness. Which made the segue into the hotness seem natural and beautiful.

Memming for sure for those rainy days when I need good happy!fic.

l57371 July 31 2007, 01:35:44 UTC

Thank you! Can you define how you mean "more tender"?

triedunture July 31 2007, 01:57:49 UTC

*thinks* I will try. I mean...there's a softness to House, a nervousness that should seem very silly considering he's such a tough cookie. But it doesn't because maybe...I don't know, let me use an example. House is debating, then finally kisses Wilson's neck while he sleeps. The first signs of encouragement are chalked up as dreams about other people, and every step of the way, House is certain this is all going to blow up in his face. Even at the end, when Wilson just wants to talk. It's a little thing, but it felt like the right kind of vulnerability for House, which is hard for a lot of fics to get across. Make sense?

l57371 July 31 2007, 02:23:32 UTC

I think so. Insecurity, yes?

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spoggly July 30 2007, 20:19:29 UTC

Very nice! House/Wilson hurt/comfort smut-fic for the Monday win. The sex was hot, stoned!House was adorable, and the h/c was well-done. *mems*

l57371 July 31 2007, 01:38:34 UTC

Thank you! I was considering saving it for Tuesday, but wtf.

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l57371 July 31 2007, 01:38:54 UTC

Hee, thanks!

t_eyla July 30 2007, 22:14:53 UTC

:) Very nice. Very hot, and sweet at the same time. Thanks for sharing! :)

l57371 July 31 2007, 01:39:48 UTC

Hee, you're welcome! And thank *you*.