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Jul 19, 2007 20:10

Title: In Retrospect
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graceongreyst July 20 2007, 03:49:16 UTC

This was just so wonderful. I have no words, it just fits them so well. With these two Words ARE meaningless and their actions towards one another tell the truth, just perfection my dear.
mems
-Jamie

l57371 July 21 2007, 01:03:07 UTC

Thank you!

jdr1184 July 20 2007, 03:49:51 UTC

I liked how you had House insist that they don't talk because there not good at talk seriously. I also liked the slow build up from jealous!House to them being together. :)

Typo: "“Just don’t way a word.”

l57371 July 21 2007, 01:03:45 UTC

How do typos sneak through when I proof read the thing like a hundred times? I don't get it. Thanks!

psyko_kittie July 20 2007, 04:54:56 UTC

Awesome.

l57371 July 21 2007, 01:04:26 UTC

Thanks!

evila_elf July 20 2007, 08:48:35 UTC

Awww! I love this!

Perfect ending that sums up the future of them. Nice to see no loose ends for a change!

:D

perfect_english July 20 2007, 09:31:43 UTC

I loved the ending. Very nicely written, makes it realistic that they would need some time to settle into each other's lives as lovers.