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l3petitemort

Resurrected

Mar 02, 2010 20:12

Title: Resurrected
Pairing: Fred/George, Fred/George/Ron
Rating: NC17
Words: 782
Warnings: Incest. Dub-con-ish-ness? But not really?
Notes: So, my sweet starstruck1986, I promised you some Twins/Ron!porn... and this is what happened. It's a bit darker than I intended; I hope it's still acceptable. This always happens! I sit down with something in mind, and ( Read more... )

character: fred weasley, character: george weasley, category: slash, warning: dubcon, rating: nc-17, character: ron weasley, fic, pairing: fred/george/ron, fandom: harry potter, pairing: fred/george

Comments 20

gala_apples March 3 2010, 04:25:59 UTC

this was hot and delicious and fragile. i really like the short sentences thing, it doesn't give the reader a chance to sink in to the information (if i'm explaining myself correctly)

l3petitemort March 4 2010, 20:19:21 UTC

thank you so much; i'm glad you liked ♥ i like to play with the short-sentence thing sometimes... i have a tendency to wayyyyy overwrite, so it's a good challenge, haha

lucianwolf March 3 2010, 04:40:43 UTC

*dies*

It's so slickly violent, like you've painted them.

l3petitemort March 4 2010, 20:19:45 UTC

*revives*

thanks... you know i like my twins with a little darkness ;)

prongsxwormtail March 3 2010, 05:41:09 UTC

Mmmmmm....tasty. Haha. I wrote new things!

=D You should read them! Also! My computer should be up and running tomorrow again! YAY!

l3petitemort March 4 2010, 20:20:00 UTC

yay computerrrrr!

and i will read.

starstruck1986 March 3 2010, 08:50:34 UTC

Oh my!

I love it -how the darkness emanates from it and how Ron is standing there, involved and yet still so apart from them it hurts.

I love the way Fred and George speak to him, like whores and something sinister at the same time.

And Ron just lost and deliciously confused in the middle of it.

Thank you so much *hugs*

l3petitemort March 4 2010, 20:21:33 UTC

i'm glad you liked this! it's not at all what i intended to do... so i wasn't sure if it'd be up your alley or not. sinister!twins are totally my guilty pleasure, and subjecting ron to them is my favourite ;) but you know he loves it!!

thanks so much for your kind words *hugs* you're the best. porn is the very least i can do for you!

starstruck1986 March 4 2010, 20:33:21 UTC

Oh, any time you want to write sinister!twins with Ron in the middle, I will lap it up and squee like mad.

Honestly, I loved it. I can see sinister!twins kidnapping Ron as their toy for a little while.

... I like that idea more than I should.

THANK YOU ♥

sra_danvers March 3 2010, 13:40:56 UTC

Wow! So hot and tender at the same time...

l3petitemort March 4 2010, 20:21:55 UTC

thank you so much! :D