The First Unburdened Breath

May 31, 2011 22:53

Title: The First Unburdened Breath
Pairing: Reid/JJ
Rating: Hard R/NC17
Warnings: Sex. Implied infidelity. Spoilers for Lauren
Notes: Good Fucking God. I've finally written something. I am not 100% happy with it, but I am glad to have fucking finished it. The End :p

The First Unburdened Breath )

character: spencer reid, fic, rating: r, character: jennifer jareau, category: het, fandom: criminal minds, pairing: reid/jj, rating: nc17

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eiffelicious June 1 2011, 19:15:08 UTC
This paragraph? Is SEVERAL DIFFERENT KINDS OF BRILLIANT: So much of her life is spent doling out truth in measured doses like medicine - to shattered families, to the press, even to the father of her own child. Too little is useless, and too much can be fatal. It’s always about judgment and precision and knowing how much to hold back.

Am very glad this fought its way out from your typety fingers :)

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ginny214 June 2 2011, 07:03:46 UTC
I agree with Effie. You capture JJ beautifully here, her grief, the weight of her silence. So well done, and your writing is, as always, just impeccable. Just lovely.

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bubblesuds June 9 2011, 06:27:29 UTC
Oh god how I missed your writing ;____; <3

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loneohone June 12 2011, 18:03:55 UTC
I feel like I found gold, another great story that could fits into the story line. Of course JJ would tell Reid, how could she not tell him.

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poeticpathetic August 9 2011, 22:46:55 UTC
I MISSED YOUR WRITING. I've just gotten the itch to write again, so I've been toying around with some ideas, but yay for this. Even if I'm late.

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