On a Mad Axis

[l3petitemort]

Title: On a Mad Axis
Pairing(s): Fred/George, Fred/George/Percy, mentioned past Percy/Penelope
Prompt(s): because i got high
Rating: NC17
Wordcount: ~2100
Summary: They only heard each other.
Warnings: Mmmm, a bit dub-con-ish, maybe? Nothing too serious. Some angst. Underage shenanigans (15 & 17). Incest. Drug use.
Notes: gala_apples wanted to see the

Comments

[lucianwolf]

What do you mean no one has commented on this?
Seriously?!?
I may be biased because I think everything you do is amazing, but this was ... awesome. I love how they dragged Percy into this, and even as they make Percy feel, he's there almost as an afterthought. They can't deny each other.

"no matter how many other people were speaking, it was just background noise. They only heard each other."

THIS. Exactly.

"They were looking at him. Someone was bloody looking at him."

God, how empty. That anyone seeing him would have been enough. How lonely was Percy, really?

His head was heavy and spinning, a mad planet on a mad axis, and he was caught up in their strange gravity.

This is brilliant. Just FYI.

"Not like that. But he has to do it. Then he can’t tell anyone. Then he did it, too."

Even stoned, they are still aware of Percy's nature. They know better than to let him go with ammunition.

And even here - where they are trying to save him from his solitude - even here he is still alone.

Srsly - if you weren't taken ... ;)

[lucianwolf]

It's late and I screwed up my italics. Sorry. :)

[l3petitemort]

Aw, thank you for your long & thoughtful comment, my love ♥ I'm so glad that you liked it. I seem to get a kick out of tormenting Percy :p

Srsly - if you weren't taken ... ;)

There's always room for one more.... ;)