Comments | kz_109: A Red-Headed Infatuation

kz_109

A Red-Headed Infatuation

Sep 20, 2011 19:28

Dongwoo/Sungjong
PG
Romance & AU, Drabble 1406w
Sungjong has been told many times of his fixation towards the 'bad boy' type. Still, that doesnt excuse the fact that he has utterly and embarassingly fallen for a complete stranger.

( Sungjong is frozen in shock and a little in nervousness because; he’s just there… staring straight at him. )

genre: romance, p: dongwoo/sungjong, f: infinite

Comments 12

stop27 September 20 2011, 12:30:59 UTC

oh my god, this was adorable :D that last bit omg, sunjong what are you doing ♥

engraved_16 September 20 2011, 23:11:04 UTC

Sungjong's being Sungjong i guess haha

Thanks for reading! ♥

andersenmom September 20 2011, 12:46:17 UTC

Bwahahahaha! That is totally awesome. Very cute!

engraved_16 September 20 2011, 23:13:35 UTC

haha im glad you enjoyed this and found it cute!

Thanks for reading :) ♥

countrymir September 20 2011, 14:12:39 UTC

a few things, and pls remember i only say this to help you better your writing: you started a lot of yoru paragraphs with sungjong, you should lookinto trying out pronouns or other ways like you did for the other paragaphs. its not bad but it just looks... idk weird?

BUT OMG I WANTED TO DIEEEE. this was so cute, i couldn't ;-; bratty sungjong and omf thinking dongwoo was a bad boy, my heart was wibbling. it was so precious. AND OMG SUNGJONG AT THE END TELLING DONGWO TO SHUT UP BC HE WAS RUINING THEIR LOVE STORY. LOLOLOL PERFECT ENDING.

i already have my dongwoo otp but my friend is forever trying to show me the appeal behind him and sungjong and this type of relationship definitely underlines what she was trying to get across to me.

sigh, cutest damn thing i've ever read for this otp

engraved_16 September 20 2011, 22:34:43 UTC

Oh did i? xD i didnt even notice till now! thanks for the tip tho, i'll definitely look into it when i write my other fics :)

Aww thanks dear! Dongwoo's first impression is always that he's this charismatic and manly guy. But truly he's this dopey sweet boy at heart!

Hmm let me guess... is it the Yadong couple? haha. Same for me, i dont really know why im so attracted to this couple yet here i am writing a fic for them, i think it's interesting maybe because of their differences in personalities :)

Thank you so much! ♥

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engraved_16 September 20 2011, 22:35:23 UTC

Aww thank you! this couple is too cute :)

thanks for reading! ♥

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engraved_16 September 27 2011, 13:08:55 UTC

omg your comment has really made my day! :)
im glad you found this cute

and im so happy that i was able to capture dongwoo's characterizations haha, it's exactly what i thought of him the first time i saw him only to find out he's this loving, and kind, sweet boy!

Thanks for reading dear! ♥