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kytivafan

NCIS Fanfiction: Love Languages

Sep 09, 2011 12:14

Title: Love Languages ( Read more... )

ziva david, tony dinozzo, ncis fanfiction

Comments 8

proseac1 September 9 2011, 16:18:54 UTC

This is beautiful! No idea why you weren't happy with it.

It's so typically Ziva, that she can say the words in every language except the one he understands.

Maybe she should try Spanish next time? XD

kytivafan September 9 2011, 17:33:38 UTC

Thanks sweetie. Glad you liked it.

I may do another snippet :)

heartundone September 9 2011, 17:09:34 UTC

I think it needs another part...where she says it in Spanish, or Italian, or something of the sort that he would understand and he can answer her in English.

And I like it. It makes my day less cranky.

kytivafan September 9 2011, 17:35:00 UTC

Boo! to lazy coworkers (not sure if that is the right word, but it's the one I am going with).

I could do another snippet... :)

alidiabin September 9 2011, 23:02:31 UTC

Very beautiful. I'm off to read the sequel now.

ophelias_heart September 10 2011, 01:18:07 UTC

Love it!

ryalin1 September 10 2011, 03:13:35 UTC

I don't know what you have against it (then again, aren't we all our own worst critics?), but I thought it was sweet. Well done.