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[sorakachan]

Title: I Notice These Things
Rating: G
Pairing(s): One-sided Toshiya/Kyo, Be creative with the other couple ^^
Summary: Well, I notice many things. Being a photographer helps me to do so. I can read people better than they can read themselves sometimes.Disclaimer:...Kyo hides under my bed

Comments

[hana_aoki]

Aww... That is cute...
And when I mix it up and place that Toshiya boy beside Shorty... Well, that is when he smiles. When he truly smiles. No lies. No dull eyes. A true smile. I'm a photographer. Not a writer. Not a painter. I notice these things."

That's just too amazing. Kudos.

[sorakachan]

Thanks ^^

[xxxayakaxxx]

I am at a loss for words...
You did a really nice job. The end... it leaves me satisfied but still wondering.

[sorakachan]

Thank you ^^
I don't write as often as I draw, but when an idea gets stuck in my head, sometimes it has to get out.
The idea for this one was having a photographer notice Toshiya smile better close to Kyo. x3

[robin_ioay]

ahwwwwwwwwwwwww..... this is sooo cute! i love it... you manage to tell the story in a very few words!!!!sugooooooi!!! i really like it!

[sorakachan]

Thank you ^^

[anthail]

Well, that is when he smiles. When he truly smiles. No lies. No dull eyes. A true smile.
I'm a photographer. Not a writer. Not a painter.
I notice these things.

This is a beautiful piece of fiction. I love those ending sentences.

[sorakachan]

Thanks ^^