Comments | kyou_kara_maou: Fic: To Bandarbia, With Love, Conrad/Yozak

mousapelli in kyou_kara_maou

Fic: To Bandarbia, With Love, Conrad/Yozak

Jun 28, 2005 16:48

Title: To Bandarbia, With Love [Conrad/Yozak ( Read more... )

yozak x conrad, fanfiction: 2005, author - mousapelli

Comments 36

annekate June 29 2005, 01:02:47 UTC

Ahh, wonderful as expected. My favorite part of your KKM fics is far and away the dialogue. It's clever, original, and often hilarious.

Example:
"Obviously," Yuuri said imperiously, "if you get engaged by slapping someone across the face, then they must congratulate you on fathering their child by punching you in the eye!"

Perfect stupid oblivious Yuuri right there.

Let's see, what else... I agree that the structure of the story was great - it was a pleasure to read (and would have been even if it wasn't fanfiction, if that makes any sense).

Oh, and the please-share-with-everyone-kun made my day. He could practically be the star of his own fic (and it would be both delicious and hilarious). ;) Great work!

mousapelli June 29 2005, 02:52:18 UTC

thanks so much! I love writing the dialogue for these guys, because they take some simple thing like 'i have been punched in the face' and make it into this ode to hilarity. I barely have to do any work.

that is so my favorite yuuri quote ever. I love when he thinks he knows what's going on.

i have no doubt that Gunter and Gwendal took the please-share-with-everyone-kun into a soundproofed room and tested it far more thoroughly than anybody would ever want to know about.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! and that is the best Yozak icon ever. mmm, flashbacks.

enigma_o June 29 2005, 01:05:21 UTC

Absolute genius. There were so many lines that made me laugh out loud.

Also, I adore Greta. When people I know have babies, they should have ones like her.

mousapelli June 29 2005, 02:53:49 UTC

thanks! i had way too much fun writing it.

The best thing about Greta is how well-adjusted she is. "why yes my daddies are having a baby, even though one of them is not quite clear on how they managed it. It's okay, the other daddy is very fertile."

glad you enjoyed!

kikotei June 29 2005, 02:29:02 UTC

"That's an even shorter list than what Wolfram would do with underwear,"

I made the mistake of eating a cracker just as this line came up. The cracker was then promptly launched halfway across the room.

Nicely done. ::grins::

mousapelli June 29 2005, 02:54:39 UTC

ahahahaha! *adds 'cracker' to list of projectile food and drink*

glad you liked it!

thecurtain June 29 2005, 04:41:57 UTC

You are a wonderful person for writing this. You hit all my fav pairings and made it all very much IC, which was very enjoyable *grin* Especially Yozak. I luff a good IC Yozak :) You even kept my attention through the whole thing, which is good, because I am dead tired ^-^()

So wonderful. Thank you thank you thank you for posting.

mousapelli June 30 2005, 02:41:29 UTC

thanks so much! I love writing Yozak, because he completely runs rings around conrad in terms of having things under control.

Those are all my favorite pairings too *g* I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

ranchelle June 29 2005, 05:25:31 UTC

Very well-written! There's so much witty dialogue that made me laugh XD All the characters are being themselves despite the pairings and the mpreg, and everything flows nicely. A wonderful read in all, thank you so much for sharing it~~

mousapelli June 30 2005, 02:50:38 UTC

thank you! i'm so glad everything worked for you, despite the mpreg, which i can't believe i am even writing. But then again, KKM, so anything goes pretty much.

so glad you liked it!