Comments | kyou_kara_maou: Winter Challenge

jazzthejazz in kyou_kara_maou

Winter Challenge

Dec 19, 2004 22:32

*wanders in like the dead*

I'm so sorry that I missed a few days. I've been miserably sick and then my half-sister came into town to visit. But I'm felling a little better and I'm back on track. So sorry for the delay.

December 17
Characters: Yozak, Greta, Wolfram, Yuuri
Rating: G

( “December_17” )

greta, wolfram, yozak, yuuri, fanfiction: 2004, author - jazzthejazz

Comments 4

prongsy December 20 2004, 07:00:25 UTC

Awwwwwwww. So cute. Sorry your so sick *huggles*

I love MummyWolfy... too cute. He's such a worry wort and it's so fitting and endearing!

Awww... I can see Wolf being a brat when sick, but that's the cutest that he just wanted Yuuri with him. Poor Yuuri is probably going to get his cold now, hee hee... then he can be all demanding! Turn about -is- fair play! ^_^

LOL... I like how Konrad's reflections are based on "A Tale of Two Cities" but better yet, how you had someone (Yuuri probably) correct him and give him "A Christmas Carol". All because he picked up the wrong Dickens book!!! Hahahahaha... I love the ending too... combining the first lines of TTC and the last line of CC like it's own story, sort of like Konrad's thoughts are shifting from one book to another, to how it was/is to how he hopes it to be. Symbolism!!!!!!!!! Ahem. Sorry, I'm an English major... I get all beside myself with this sort of thing. I'll reign in my inner geek now.

Great fics!!!! ^____^

jazzthejazz December 21 2004, 08:46:01 UTC

Ha! Yes, Wolfram can take care of Yuuri when he gets his cold. And I am learning all about Turn About...I got my mom sick.

No, no! Let the inner geek reign free! I WAS going for something deeper with number 19 and I think I am pleased with the results.

I'm glad you liked this set.

jcho December 20 2004, 16:18:12 UTC

XD I love the last image of Yozak in the first one, all dressed up... and yes, Wolfram did seem to word things to make it sound like they were on a date ^^ how cute!

The 18th - so sweet!! ahh!*melts*

Interesting! I never thought how that line could relate so well! And telling it from Konrad's p.o.v. is a nice way to put it too. The ending was excellent too!

jazzthejazz December 21 2004, 08:28:23 UTC

Thanks! It just isn't Christmas for my family without watching some form of A Christmas Carol and I so wanted to fit into my advent challenges. Glad you liked!