[Fanfic] Mine

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Title: Mine

Warnings: HUGE SPOILERS FOR THE LATEST BOOK I warned you. @_@

Couples: Shinou X Great Sage

Rating: PG13

Length: 250 Words

Disclaimer: This has spoilers. Don't read if you don't want to be spoiled.

Summary: Just a very laid-back day thousands of years ago...

"Can you not see that I am busy?" I swatted away the hand that was

Comments

[apapazukamori]

Fic's not bad, but I'm calling "shenannigans" on the "spoiler" until there's proof somewhere. XD;;

[_miyuchan_]

out of curioisity XD shenanningans means...?
*admits she doesn't know*

[apapazukamori]

There're a lot of definitions here (and I spelled it wrong *shame* XD). It's basically a way to say "I don't believe you/it". This is a big spoiler. Like, completely perspective-changing. And though the novels are different from the series or the manga, it's so completely out of left field that some confirmation would be nice. ^^;;;

[_miyuchan_]

Well, they are half brothers tho...I mean, different mothers but same father. Maybe in the anime they won't put that but in the novels it's like that...yeah ._.

[_miyuchan_]

Wow THAT's a bitter ending...but it might be for that reason that I love this pairing so much...*_*

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that part was pretty @_____@

but in the novel, it said he never actually told him... he just heard him talking about it with some person, but Daikenjya wasn't able to hear too well.

[_miyuchan_]

yeah I remember Shinou wanting to hide that yeah, that's why I think it's a bitter but that's the reason I like it.

Honestly I...got the feeling Daikenja knew there was something not exactly..."clear" but still, I liked the idea of him not knowing and I like the idea of Shinou not wanting to tell him, makes me love them even more^^

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I liked how his personality against Shinou was like, completely different from what was shown in the anime.

These days, I can't even distinguish between what happened in the novels and what happened in the anime. XD

Which is bad.

[kgsandbear]

SQUEEEEE I love it! *fangirls*

ANGST!!! ♥♥♥

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ANGSTANGST @_@

But yeah.

They are pretty much an incest emo pairing there. XD

[kgsandbear]

Seriously, I loved this fic.

I like the opening sentence and the closing sentences. And I like how in between, there is a small moment that shows so much Shinou's and Daikenja's personalities. And I love how Daikenja's coldness can be explained by the 'secret.' So much tension, in just a few words!! ♥

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XD I'm honored so much can be inferred from my 250 words! XD

[twyxdust]

....they're brothers?

o_0

okay.

i may have to stare at the wall for an hour to get this to sink in my system.

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I was like, aw'elkfn;ewroiantfgoiernfi???? XD
I'll go stare with ya.

[twyxdust]

btw, i forgot to tell you, i loved the fic. XD

i'm just.... shocked.

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Thank you. ^ω^/~~

I thought of it this morning as I was going to my first class... And I wanted to write it, but I had a Sociology midterm, so I couldn't... So as soon as I was done with my midterm, I wrote it. XD

Nice and concise. :P

[neocloud9]

Oh, WOW.

I mean, boy howdy. I certainly didn't see that coming...

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XD meep.