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kynseidk

{fic} Oneshot: Moving In (Part 3)

Apr 01, 2009 17:06

Title: Moving In
Characters: Yamashita Tomohisa, Ikuta Toma, mentions of TomaPi friends and the Ikuta household.
Pairings: TomaPi, hints of Akame
Rating: PG (language)
Genre: Fluff/Crack?
Summary: Toma gets busy, and Tomohisa moves in.
Disclaimer: Mine. In my head.

a/n: hello. uhm, yeah, self-betaed with tenses and thoughts in disarray. done at around 3am ( Read more... )

oneshot, otp, fiction

Comments 27

mehei10 April 1 2009, 09:37:45 UTC

sooo goodXD
i love it!

mehei10 April 1 2009, 09:38:09 UTC

wait, i'm first

yaaaay i'm firstXD

kynseidk April 1 2009, 09:45:18 UTC

uwaaa, fast!! haha. i keep on getting scared about the angst part, because there will be more. oh i hope this fic ends up not being hated.

Butting in... pulubi April 1 2009, 10:20:26 UTC

What are you talking about? I cannot wait to see where this is going. Even though I have not the slightest idea what the heck is going on. But as this is TomaPi, I know somehow it'll work out. : D

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ecyojn April 1 2009, 10:23:13 UTC

Uh-oh...... Trouble brews in the air.. Toma promising to go see Jun with Yamapi now trying to spend more time with him just spells HELL-IS-GOING-TO-SPILL-OVER...

Oh well, hope Toma can work this all out between the love of his life, his friends, and his work. Cross my fingers! ^_^

Thank you for writing!

kynseidk April 1 2009, 10:39:53 UTC

oh-- but you think like tomohisa. haha. i will be so dead even after the next part comes out. please don't make me spill the details.

ecyojn April 1 2009, 11:39:37 UTC

It's ok! No spills required! I'll patiently and happily wait for the continuation!
Ganbatte oh!

I think like yamapi????! Ok...

salome620 April 1 2009, 12:52:50 UTC

paragraphs 7 & 9: kitang-kita ang pagka-medsci student mo. ha ha ha!

ow, my heart goes out to Yamashita. i mean, he's swallowed his pride, kinapalan nya ang mukha nya, he imposed himself on Toma's family - & he gets a hesitant Toma... i feel for him.

yep, i smell trouble. & if Toma gets killed by Yamapi, it's his own fault!

side issue: hope-rei updated with a translation of Toma's Jweb. go see just how dangerously Toma likes to live his life. ha ha ha!

kynseidk April 3 2009, 07:25:27 UTC

my exams are done. senior na ako. sh*t. sorry haha needed to get that out.

wei, what did toma do? haven't seen any nikki translations yet.

Yamashita, i think, has no pride when it comes to Toma. even in real life, i think he'd totally succumb to what Toma will say. which is why i love him. i think him and Toma would just stay a tie as my number 1 (so they're number one-s). and even if i bought a jin uchiwa my dreams are still of toma and yamashita.

salome620 April 3 2009, 08:22:51 UTC

did you mean this - yep, i smell trouble. & if Toma gets killed by Yamapi, it's his own fault! - when you said this: "wei, what did toma do? haven't seen any nikki translations yet?"

i was referring to your fic: Toma agreeing to go out with MatsuJun.

"Yamashita, i think, has no pride when it comes to Toma." - i think so too (i keep saying that to you a lot noh?). like what he did in that nikki to draw Toma out. his tactic was cute but it's quite dubious ne? makes me wonder how far he's willing to go to keep Toma...

hope you don't keep us waiting long for the next part. & congratulations for finishing your exams & being a senior!

kynseidk April 3 2009, 10:28:44 UTC

no, i meant about the Toma Jweb trans. :) you said he likes to live dangerously, why? ^^

and i repeat, who's Jun?

ok i must be confusing you, i'll be posting the next part before 9pm, hopefully. i'm stuck on hiro mizushima, sorry. haha.

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camaronzin April 1 2009, 13:11:28 UTC

Oh gawd! Going out with Jun, and probably taking Yamapi with him? LOL ... Here comes the OVERLY possesive and jealous Yamapi! XD ... me wants to read ^^

WII! Can't wait!!

kynseidk April 3 2009, 07:28:29 UTC

JUN. hmmm. who's jun again? :)

thank you, will post the next part soon.

onirigi_love April 1 2009, 14:37:59 UTC

awww i love this chapter! so flirty and cracky! sry but erm i dun really feel any immense angst here except for this "I'm right here, you know? I might get busy, but I'm here. I'm always here, always yours, you know that right?" gosh the heart wrenching feeling of this sentence is killing me~ but i will die with no regrets lol>.< and btw i really love angsty tomapi fic but most of their ending is always so depressing T.T

can't wait for nxt chapter! an attention seeking...and uh drunk? tomo is just <3!

kynseidk April 3 2009, 07:30:36 UTC

oh, thank you then. :) and don't worry i love them too much so i don't plan on making the ending a sad one. people tend to say they've grown apart because they got separated, but i think they just got stronger and worked harder for a happier ending.

next part will be up soon. ^^