{fic} Heliogdom

[kynseidk]

Title: Heliogdom (Zero)
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Comments

[oroja]

It sounds interesting xD I love this kind of stories when I don't know what and why and where it all leads.

I'm waiting for more xD

[kynseidk]

wah.thank you thank you. ♥

this piece is still a bit confusing, even i had to re-read it (i've done that at least 15 times?) to make sure i was getting my words straight.

[fullhouse_10]

the plot seems really interesting and I'm looking forwardd to the next chapter!
I was a bit lost with the characters, but I guess it's normal as it's just the first chapter^^
thank you for sharing!!

[kynseidk]

thank you for reading and the comment!

yes i know the characters are confusing,I'll have to clear that up in the next chapters. The story's also still a bit jumpy,from--different points of view(?)perhaps. this is why I'm delaying the posting of this.

♥ thanks again.

~kang.

[lelouch7]

even though I'm a bit lost on the characters
but the storyline is interesting
waiting for next updates :)

[kynseidk]

thank you for reading and commenting!

yes i know the characters are very vague, but I'll try my best to clear them up in the next parts. :)

♥

~kang.